 Potterworm 2009-06-24 . chapter 1You have an excellent grasp on these characters, really. Great story, as always. |
 Stealth Dragon 2007-11-28 . chapter 1Okay, how the heck did I miss this? Very nice, and very sad but in a good way. |
 Delka 2007-09-11 . chapter 1As fine as ever. |
 ValleyA 2007-09-07 . chapter 1interesting scenario! I like it and the interactions were great. Thanks for sharing! |
 Listy 2007-09-07 . chapter 1A nice little fic, really enjoyed it. I Had a bit of a tummy flip when I thought Sheppard was going over the cliff. I liked the ending too, Ronon is a good friend.
Thanks for sharing and can't wait to read your next fic. |
 Laura-trekkie 2007-09-07 . chapter 1Well, I think I should thank ROO for the request as much as you for writing it.
Great story. Poor John, not even a relaxing trip to the mainland is safe! Those were some alarming hallucinations, especially the form of atonement that seemed to be required. I'm glad Ronon was able to subdue him in time and that Carson was able to fix him. Great team interaction too, as always. I especially liked the ending with John and Ronon, Ronon being the one most likely to know where John's mind was at just then. |
 Frisco 2007-09-07 . chapter 1I like the visual of Sheppard releasing the mementos to the ocean. Nice way to show the letting go of the past. |
 Roo 2007-09-07 . chapter 1 well i know i already gave you a private review when you sent this to me, but SQUEE!! i still love this fic!! any kind of vunerable, crazy shep is fabbo!! didnt say in my email but i love the ending with ronon carrying shep..LMAO! hehe xx |
 shywalk 2007-09-07 . chapter 1I loved this...should be part of an ep...we all need closer |
 parisindy 2007-09-06 . chapter 1aw sweet! |
 Splitbeak 2007-09-06 . chapter 1Run Forrest Run!
Haha! Ronon to the rescue. Teehee, that was fun. |