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THE FILTH!
2008-04-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseC'mon people get to your senses, the loser writing this cr*pfic gave up his imagination due to the enormous negative feedback and killed the next: "A Thin Verneer" (that or he wasn't THAT smart to know how to continue the tale you know) before time, the only good thing is that this BS had a quick and decent death, painless and merciful which lead us to nowhere, just as we began when conned to read this two-bit piece of fiction
acer-sigma
2008-04-01
ch 7,
abuseGood ending to the story. Certainly sounds like the DOctor gave John and crew something to think about, and it looks like they went out an made a difference. Liked how you ended this with D'Argo recounting the story. Thought his catching sight of the Tenth Doctor was a nice touch.
JovianJeff
2008-03-31
ch 7,
abuseThat was beautiful. Not simply, but equisitely beautiful. Great ending, and likely my favorite chapter out of this series. Not because it is the end, I rarely like something good to end, but how it did so. Passages that rang true, and yet did not preach, did not talk down to, just stated and let the truth of the words hold the power of them. Nice touches with wrap ups of how everyone on Moya, including Moya, had their ends in this future history. Thank you very much not just writing this story, but persevering in the face of critism that didn't want to add or construct, just tear away. As is the rule with your work, innovative ideas that are well executed. Bravo sir, bravo!
Shylock Norman
2008-03-28
ch 7, anon.
abuseSo our un-immaginative friend finally gave up due to all the hate mail he received (WE know, we know when you p** in the street, we know when you f*rt in public, we know when do you do your sh*t) giving us a dissapointing ending instead of the rollercoaster of 50 chapters he could have given us...shouldn't he be an old brit w*kn*r without imagination. You know one of those who should have been eliminated during the Blitz instead of live, then again all of England should have burned in the hand of Unca Adolf and so we shouldn't have to endure the presence of stopid tabloids, w*nk*ng old queens and America and the USSR could have gotten the world only for them (of course the Japs should have been decimated by the Russkies, so we wouldn't have that abomination that anime is since most of the people in this site are NARURETARDS or BLEACHITES and Japan should be a province of the USSR). The Price of Peace? HAve to endure ee-diotic fnafics like yours moron, better go on in a world wide war (as the Hydric Wars! Soon in 2015!) in a blaze of glory that will engulf all of mankind and will kill us all for our stupidity and warmongering. And I can hear the cries of the civvies: "Oh Doctor, why didn't you saved us?"
Harry2
2008-03-28
ch 7,
abuseA fitting finish to this story. While it may have been a different incarnation of the Doctor (probably #5) that D'argo saw, it was still the Doctor. And I think he was very pleased at what he heard and saw.
Magic_Amethyst80
2008-03-25
ch 5, anon.
abuseLike the idea of, as Aeryn says, Susan "stepping up to the plate," and taking charge of the situation.

Ah, and I really like the point the doctor is making about Elyria being a hypocrite. I will admit that I have not seen much Farscape, but I love the ideas that this fic deals with.

And I love seeing The Doctor in action, especially against Elyria.
Magic_Amethyst80
2008-03-25
ch 4, anon.
abuseOnce again reading this, and keep thinking to myself that you are playing around in the Whoniverse, with One and Susan.

I keep wondering where you are going to go with this fic, and would be curious to see what one of the post Time War incarnations of The Doctor would have to say on the subject of war and the destruction of civilizations being a necessary evil?
Magic_Amethyst80
2008-03-25
ch 3, anon.
abuseEnjoyable chapter, and interesting point One makes about a species which controls the natural happenings of other species, by keeping them in a false, eternal bliss. Nice to see a bit of a philosophical debate in fanfic, something very few fanfic authors are willing do. In addition I'm still glad you chose one of the "Pre Nine," incarnations of The Doctor for this. While I know this fic is about the philosophy about war, and the natural course of evolution, and to some extent, the prime directive, I don't know if Nine, or Ten would have handled things quite the same way as one of the pre time war Doctors.

Also like the idea of One giving John the idea that perhaps he is now part of a different culture. Just as the Doctor in many ways became a resident of Earth, John has become a resident of whatever world Farscape takes place in.

In addition, nice to see you adding science, and mathematical equations into this. You make an excellent point about the lack of science in Doctor Who and Farscape. Personally at this point, I think injecting a tiny bit of science into Who would improve the show. While Star Trek and Babylon 5 often hit us over the head with political analogies and scientific "what ifs," to the point where it started to hurt, at times while watching the New Doctor Who, I still wish they would mix an eansy bit of that in.
Magic-Amethyst80
2008-03-25
ch 2,
abuseSo far beautifully done, like the idea of using the First Doctor and Susan for a Farscape crossover. You have done an excellent job exploring things from the perspective of Susan, her feelings on the situations she has been in and about her grandfather. Also have to commend you on capturing the antics between the two.

Onto other chapters!
gaby
2008-03-08
ch 6, anon.
abuseGreat story.

Have any one make a Farscape crossover with Space:Above and beyond.

it can wokr if it,s before season4.
Harry2
2008-03-07
ch 6,
abuseWe all hope for peace. But sometimes, even for a Time Lord such as the Doctor, there comes a time when one must fight. And that is what John has decided. The time has come to fight for what he believes in. And as for what the Doctor did, LORDS OF LIGHT! It smacks to me of what we saw in Five Doctors of Rassilon!
sirtechlocke
2008-03-07
ch 6,
abuseWow. You... are good. I could hear and see each of the characters. Especially when John asked everyones opinion. It pulled me in, wrapped me tight, and wouldn't let go.

I really hope to write that well one day.
JovianJeff
2008-03-07
ch 6,
abuseMarvelous! From the horrific fate of Elyria to the discussion of what freedom means to the point of not backing out of the tough character call of shooting. While it didn't matter in the end, the decision to shoot had its own drama. Also I don't think I've seen Stark handled so well as in this chapter and wonderful scene with him and Chiana.
John Cricthon, GODHEAD
2008-03-07
ch 6, anon.
abuseFirst, your queen ordered to kill Lady Di! And for claiming being such a freedom fighter you're an hypocrite mister, I saw personally how you voted in favor of the installation of TV cams in the streets, you want a safer world for you and scew up the rest, eh? BEsides everyone in this site seem to hate the Vorlons such as Pansy Jeff or Albert G*n*ds since they only want SPACEBUTLERS! SPACEBUTLERS! SPACEBUTLERS! full of violence and mayhem (as you want to the otherwise peaceful Saggitarius arm of Farscape just for see the joy of people dying not for what they believe in -actually if we could see people living for what they believe in I actually believe you're not an slug-thinking stem cell- but for your personal enjoyment of see them dying, because you WANTTHEM TO DIE FOR YOU, Goa'uld False God.

Saying that I will unleash in 2012 a virus against all fanfic sites that will...improve histories to my expectations, ah and Cory Doctorow my iron b*lls.
wej
2008-02-25
ch 5,
abuseI'm a hardcore Farscape fan and I get it, moreso now than I did, but I liked it even then. I'm enjoying this very much. For the way this AU is I think you have all the characters and story in sync. I love how you did the frustration in their minds. Looking foreward to more.
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