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| Sakuka 2008-09-28 ch 11, | abuseaw...you really should write a sequel for this...your really good adn you had me about 3 inches away from the screen at times,. trying to read as fast as i could so i could figure out what happens! XD |
| serenbach 2008-06-16 ch 11, | abuseWow, what a great story! Just read the whole thing through for the second time. I love the slightly older and more mature Yuffie yet she's still all cheerful and happy, and I really enjoyed the pacing and development of the relationship! Reall enjoyed this :) |
| pride1289 2008-04-17 ch 5, | abuseFine. I will go with the enigma thing. But i STILL will always believe Seph is Vinnies son. Think about it. There isn't enough Jenova and/or Mako stuff in the entire UNIVERSE to make anyone who is Hojo's kid look that good. If you are a hojo fan...I am sorry. but that is how my fangirl mind processes it. Plz ignore all my other reviews about Chaos. TTFN |
| pride1289 2008-04-17 ch 7, | abuseI miss Galian and Chaos! *tears* They were my favorites ;_; I have to go to school now. TTFN |
| pride1289 2008-04-17 ch 6, | abuseTo bad it couldn't have been Chaos. But of course w/o Chaos he would die in like...a few weeks cuz of being shot and all. |
| pride1289 2008-04-16 ch 4, | abuselol. Rufus. To bad Chaos isn't in this. Oh well. I like it any way. |
| pride1289 2008-04-16 ch 3, | abuseomg! I was thinking of what to type for a review, and all of a sudden i get a foot cramp!! It hurts! XO Even though I love Galian, I love Chaos more. Is he going to be in this?? |
| pride1289 2008-04-16 ch 2, | abuselol. I am okay with your time line here. But Vinnys claw can't come off. Ya know, if he could have taken it off, don't ya think he would have?? |
| Illa Scriptor 2008-04-13 ch 11, | abuseAh! When I wrote my review, I thought I was at the end of the story, then noticed the next chapter button. #laughs# You could have ended last chapter, but I think you tied up the story nicely in this one. |
| Illa Scriptor 2008-04-13 ch 10, | abuseW...T...H? One of the best Yuffentine fics out there, and only 46 reviews? I was especially impressed by how you handled your OC's of your friend and yourself. Cally and Tasha were both extremely believable and it was easy for me to forget that they are not canon. :) Good job. All in all, a well-done work. |
| Chaerring Trinity 2008-03-22 ch 11, | abuseI love it! I love how everyone described Vince as awkward it was funny and the whole Da Chao thing was priceless! I've never actually played the games (only seen the movie) so most of what I know comes from fanfiction and Wikipedia but when she started praying to Da Chao I double-taked and was thinking CHAOS? then I read it again and thought oh ok but then he popped up and said basically DUH! so I laughed really hard...but yeah I really like this I'm favoriting it! :D but the ending sort of just stopped I mean do they ever get married or have kids? |
| Dark Knight Harkness 2008-03-07 ch 3, | abuseWOW! I am loving this! It is so cool! Am gonna read more soon! Die and be free of pain or live and fight your sorrow! DKH |
| Crystal Royale 2008-02-16 ch 11, | abuseWow, that was such a wonderful story! I think it was masterfully done, and I like the way you portrayed everyone. Plus I love chapters that are nice and long, and even though this story is only eleven chapters, it is gorgeously long! Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Happy Writing! ~Cryssy |
| queenofspades19 2008-01-02 ch 11, | abuseLOVED IT. COULDA USED MORE FLUFFINESS THOUGH. |
| Lt. Commander Richie 2008-01-02 ch 11, | abuse-Nods- I can't see anything wrong, no plot holes... You do very well. Much better than me. A lot of the time I have plot holes every few feet, but you do a very good job of keeping yours spackled over. |