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luffyluffy
2008-04-04 . chapter 11
D:

JIN NU!


*clings*
luffyluffy
2008-04-04 . chapter 4
WOW JIN! WOW! GO BE BADASS IN MY BACKYARD!!
iluvjellybeans
2008-02-06 . chapter 17
I really like your drabbles. They are a delight to read. I am tired and can't finish at the moment, so I will just review now.

Great work and when I get round to it, I will read the rest.
courtXjester
2008-01-24 . chapter 20
lol! that was nice. good job!
safarigirl83
2008-01-21 . chapter 20
Nice chapter. ^_^ I liked the ending line.
Lala
2007-12-07 . chapter 19
was that Santa?
safarigirl83
2007-11-19 . chapter 18
Aww. Too sad. -_- But very good. ^_^
Lord OF Illusion
2007-11-09 . chapter 10
I always wondered if Jin would make a real impression on Mugen!

Interesting point.
Lord OF Illusion
2007-11-09 . chapter 9
very true
Lord OF Illusion
2007-11-09 . chapter 8
a little confusing as to who this is.

But very deep and poetic though!
Lord OF Illusion
2007-11-09 . chapter 6
Hahahhahah!

That was an excellent ending.

You did Mugen's POV with great justice!

lol

I loved the comparisions and discriptions
Lord OF Illusion
2007-11-09 . chapter 5
Now this one was very thoughtful!

I like this little section because it could either be about Mugen or Jin. I am almost assuming this is about Jin's POV because it is written in a very articulate and insightful manner!

Very good.
Lord OF Illusion
2007-11-09 . chapter 4
Now that seemed a bit aggressive for Jin.

Him and his books! What a strange individual he is!
Lord OF Illusion
2007-11-09 . chapter 3
O.K. :(

Is this suppose to be from Mugen's percpective on getting jacked at a bar.

I'm very confused.

You should hesitate! To think of the creative and structral elements here.
Lord OF Illusion
2007-11-09 . chapter 2
WHAT?!

very disjointed, what the heck was suppose to be going on
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