 luffyluffy 2008-04-04 . chapter 11D:
JIN NU!
*clings* |
 luffyluffy 2008-04-04 . chapter 4WOW JIN! WOW! GO BE BADASS IN MY BACKYARD!! |
 iluvjellybeans 2008-02-06 . chapter 17I really like your drabbles. They are a delight to read. I am tired and can't finish at the moment, so I will just review now.
Great work and when I get round to it, I will read the rest. |
 courtXjester 2008-01-24 . chapter 20lol! that was nice. good job! |
 safarigirl83 2008-01-21 . chapter 20Nice chapter. ^_^ I liked the ending line. |
 Lala 2007-12-07 . chapter 19 was that Santa? |
 safarigirl83 2007-11-19 . chapter 18Aww. Too sad. -_- But very good. ^_^ |
 Lord OF Illusion 2007-11-09 . chapter 10I always wondered if Jin would make a real impression on Mugen!
Interesting point. |
 Lord OF Illusion 2007-11-09 . chapter 9very true |
 Lord OF Illusion 2007-11-09 . chapter 8a little confusing as to who this is.
But very deep and poetic though! |
 Lord OF Illusion 2007-11-09 . chapter 6Hahahhahah!
That was an excellent ending.
You did Mugen's POV with great justice!
lol
I loved the comparisions and discriptions |
 Lord OF Illusion 2007-11-09 . chapter 5Now this one was very thoughtful!
I like this little section because it could either be about Mugen or Jin. I am almost assuming this is about Jin's POV because it is written in a very articulate and insightful manner!
Very good. |
 Lord OF Illusion 2007-11-09 . chapter 4Now that seemed a bit aggressive for Jin.
Him and his books! What a strange individual he is! |
 Lord OF Illusion 2007-11-09 . chapter 3O.K. :(
Is this suppose to be from Mugen's percpective on getting jacked at a bar.
I'm very confused.
You should hesitate! To think of the creative and structral elements here. |
 Lord OF Illusion 2007-11-09 . chapter 2WHAT?!
very disjointed, what the heck was suppose to be going on |