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| Adriannrod Svit-Kona Sama 2008-07-15 ch 3, | abuseTobias swoops down, and claws out her eyes, a hork bajir burst in a cuts her into little pieces. Mary-Sues should all go to hell, and burn. |
| Mrowrkat98 2008-07-06 ch 3, | abuseHahaha! This is FANTASTIC! I really liked the old one but I LOVE this one. Great job, I can't wait to read more :D |
| tereseh 2008-07-06 ch 3, | abuseIt's totally like a Mary Sue invasion. I totally like her multicoloured eyes and her like shiny white teeth XD It made me like totally laugh. You're like ironic, right? XD Lmao |
| Anon. 2008-07-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseA fair chapter! |
| QuicktoSee 2007-10-05 ch 2, | abuse*Snicker* |
| QuicktoSee 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseHaha! This is funny. I especially like the riff on the "I can't tell you my last name, or where I live" bit from the series. Onward to the next chapter! |
| voodooqueen126 2007-09-14 ch 2, | abusesilly girl... but well written. |
| voodooqueen126 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abusewhat is this? hadn't you allready written this? |
| moon eclipse shadows 2007-09-09 ch 2, | abuseI'm not really too sure what to think of this yet, but it sounds very good so far. Please continue soon! |
| Manwe-Varda team 2007-09-07 ch 2, | abuseGood Chapter! |