Your A/N said you took a long time to update. I think it was well worth it. I like the way you have made it believable Harry was a twin to Draco. You still keep Harry as Harry with a twist. I can't wait to see what you have in store for DD and Ron. Not sure about Hermione. McGonigale should be whipped and left in a snow drift. I can see the story in my minds eye. Thank you for shareing your story.

I hope you plan to finish this fic. I love it and can't wait to read more.

I just read every single chapter you wrote and this is one very powerful story you created. I like the way you brought out Harry/Drake out in being a girl first and then having magic reveal his true form. Also, I like the way you made the Malfoy's into a broken family missing their younest son/brother and then finding him. I can't wait what you have cooked up next for the following chapter. Why don't you have them finish off the school term with both Drake & Draco being in the same house or having Magic hold his Veela blood from coming in early. It would a shame for this family not having any time together.

Ooh, I loved the "if you attempt to start up your ways as a Dark Lord again, I’d advice you to do a lot of healing first, or your rule might be the shortest one in history"! I laughed so much!! It would be soo funny though if he did exactly that! Lol a side story of how he accumulated healing points to do that lol! amazing!!

Anyway, loved the punishments and the plot =) heheh

Hells

I just finished reading the 20 chapters of Let the Guilty Pay posted here on .
There were, of course, some weaknesses: Things took place faster than I think that they should have. Things that would have made things easier to undersatnd if they had been explained at the beginning came later in the story.
But there were also strenghts: The plot held the interest. The story is very original. The punishments for the gulity were very creative.
On the whole, the story was enjoyable. This being said...

PLEASE WRITE MORE! I want to know what happened to Ron and to the real Harry and the Severus, and so on and so on.
If at all possible, I think that a rewrite would be interesting as you have more skills now and I think that you could write an even better story now.
Thank You for your efforts in writing an enjoyable fan fiction.

Wow, what an utterely awesome story so richly full of both mystery and intrigues at every turn. I just love the justice/punishments handed down by magic's emssaries Trouble & Mischief. Especially Lily, James, Sirius, though I did feel a bit sorry for poor Remus. But it was truly brilliant what was done to Tom Riddle and Albus Dumbledore both the emissaries and magic herself, hehe! I can't wait to read more on how Remus copes raising Sirius from a baby & how Lily gets on being a servant to Petunia. How Tom will cope with having to heal others in order to gain a day of life. Once again a brilliant story!

Fun twists!

This is a fascinating story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Just where do you get your ideas from? Smile! That was bloody brilliant! But I do hope that isn't the end.

welli will say this much it is diffrent im very intrested to see whare it will go from hear

The first few chapters with Kelly were well done with lots of good scenes and dialog. I missed her a lot when you blew everything up.

The kidnapping plot and the explanation of motive and quilt were really good; the last few chapters dealing with the sentencing sequences were way over done. I understand the urge to punish, especially after everything you laid at their feet, but the actual presentation was boring.

Awesome! Wow, I can't wait to read more of this utterely brilliant, story. I love the way the plot was very slowly revealed piece by piece. With so many brilliant twists and turns that certainly kept me guessing! Loved the way Harry/Drake staged his potions accident and became "Kelly" and then ended being resorted into Slytherin, hehe! Then, as if that wasn't enough there was the invocation of a "plea for justice from magic" - resulting in the revealing of a bunch bigger web of lies, betrayals. So many people truly suffered because of Albus Dumbledore and how he shaped them! I think that no one had ever questioned his views/plans/or motives before, and because of this the wizarding world has suffered. Even poor Tom Riddle was shaped by Dumbledores actions, its little wonder he grew into an angry adult wanting revenge on the betrayers as he viewed them. Can't help wondering how Hermione's had her world of trust in both books and Albus Dumbledore shattered, she seemed utterely lost in the story? Whereas Ron seemed to care little except to get revenge on Harry/Drake?

Wow, brilliant story. I just love how Harry/Kelly staged the potions accident, hehe! I'm surprised the poor boy didn't do it sooner. Its also surprising that no one noticed the little clues that he gave away throughout the years about his true nature/and abilities. I think that Kelly has found a true home/and acceptance in slytherin house. I think so many people have held "Harry" up on a pedestal with their own preconceptions of what he was like/and able to do. As if he was a clone of his parents, to be as good as them in the same areas of magic - totally ignoring the fact that Harry/Kelly is an individual who never knew/or grew up with Lily and James and his only memory of them is the night they died. I think that Harry/Kelly has been used/manipulated by everyone for there own perhaps, even Hermione. I can understand why James made the betrothal contract betwen Harry & Ginny, and provided money available to the Weasleys. It was done with the best intentions at heart, but I don't think even James expected Harry not to know about the betrothral contract at the age of 15 years. Everyone has either lied or declined the full truth to Harry from the day he entered the wizarding world. I mean expecting him to act/and have the knowledge and skills of a "pureblood" wizard of his status, when he's been given no training to do so. Harry only knows about his "trust account", and probably not about any Potter Family vaults or any properties, or other investments that the family had, either. Can't wait to find out more about elemental cats and why Severus is acting so differently towards Ms Potter? Whats the importance of elemental cats only bonding with twins?

loving it

And another question, are you going to update this pretty little fic? I'd really like to see what happens with everyone...