that was great loved it

Just G R E A T !

i love it!
maybe you should do a story about them getting married! that would be awsome!

aw! that was seriously adorable! love the water scene!!

This story is so descriptive and well written. I loved the storyline. I hope you write more.

I read all your Sue Thomas fanfictions and I just have one word: Unbelievable! I love them! Sue and Jack are SO cute together.!

O.O Ohmygoodness, I love it. Despite the fact I got confused about the "out of the air and into the water" part. It's great. =D

aws awws aws awws awws! this was such a sweet story. im so glad that I got a chance to read it :D

good job on this. i love sue thomas and i loved this fanfic.

good job and i hope that you keep writing.

Great story!! Hope you post a sequel to this!! Love it!!