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Lady Demoonica Darkmoon
2008-08-20
ch 33,
abuseI've been reading this for some time now, on here and on AFF, which-ever site gets the updates first. I don't have an AFF account, so I thought I'd give you the review here. I love this story, absolutely love it to bits and pieces, and I hope you have a long plot still ahead for all of us to read. I will say that with the population growth of the Clanluna, the member list at the top comes in handy quite a lot, thank you for keeping it. I noticed on the newer chapters on AFF that you got around to naming the Centar and Unicorns, I got a giggle out of Star-gazer, I have a kitten named that. Please keep this story going. I'll be here reading, even if I remain quiet. Sorry about that.

Ja-ne!

- - - Lady Demoonica Darkmoon
mekareami
2008-07-30
ch 33,
abuseOMg this is such an imaginative crossover. I love it!! I hope that you update soon and continue the saga for a long long time. 2 of my favorite series of all time in one story. Thankyou very much for writing.
EdgarAndTerraFigaro
2008-07-15
ch 31,
abuseI "really" want you to update as soon as possible. Please, i mean.
13figureskater-Draco'sgirl
2008-06-23
ch 27,
abuseooh! brac made me mad. -muttermutter- he has no right to do that to anyone, especially a pregnant woman.

(T_T means sadness or crying, by the way.)

more soon?
--kyra
13figureskater-Draco'sgirl
2008-06-22
ch 26,
abuseglad the sungaea are growing to accept the clan! the bit with creb was sad, though T_T. still, at least they get to see him!

--kyra
13figureskater-Draco'sgirl
2008-06-14
ch 25,
abuse-muttermutter- durc should grow up -muttermutter- it's so depressing that you've made him into the villain. it's understandable, but it's depressing. then again, i've sort of started him along the same path too, so i suppose i shouldn't be talking.

thanks for the update!
--kyra
13figureskater-Draco'sgirl
2008-06-12
ch 24,
abuseif this goes on much longer, they'll have to put a silencing charm around the hearth. lol.

very happy to see that there's more up so soon! is this going to continue? i certainly hope so! i loved the little flashback sequence, though it was certainly disturbing. poor luna, having to pretend to love wormtail. -shakes head-

thanks for the quick update!
--kyra
13figureskater-Draco'sgirl
2008-06-10
ch 23,
abuseyay, ayla found her people! it's so sad that iga was exiled, though. T_T. hopefully the sungaea will learn their lesson and let her back soon.

glad that you're back with us!

--kyra
13figureskater-Draco'sgirl
2008-03-29
ch 21,
abusei like this story. i've been reading it on the auelboard, and i like it a lot! i'm so sorry you have to take a break from it. hope your life works out so that you can get back to writing!
--kyra
Sayan Kotor
2007-10-17
ch 7,
abuseWell, now it`s getting exciting ^^
I cant wait to when they meet the Others..
I mean, if they`ll ever meet then??
Sayan Kotor
2007-09-30
ch 4,
abuseHey ^^
I`m very curious to know what are you plans with the plotline, but I`ll wait to discover in new chapters ^^

Pls, be careful to not rush some things. I mean, when everything happens to fast it gave a sensation of falsity.

Now, on a more specific point, when were killed 3 Aurouchs? I didn’t see this described...

Although this time I had more critics I still liked this chapter a lot and am looking forward to more!

And sorry my bad english, sometimes is very difficult to express myself, so reviewing is not as easy.. but, well, it`s a good exercise :-p.
ranma hibiki
2007-09-28
ch 3,
abusewell that confirms my beliefs. i have seen this movie before..well up to a point, its interesting to see how you have luna affecting the past
Sayan Kotor
2007-09-28
ch 3,
abusexD ^^
Pls, keep it going ^^

the ending was unpredicted :-p

curious to know who is this man that appeared in the end.
Sayan Kotor
2007-09-23
ch 2,
abusenice ^^ I would like to see more from HP than just Luna, but it's not really a problem... but do pls keep going ^^
Sayan Kotor
2007-09-23
ch 1,
abuseHey, very nice!! The first Jean Auel fanfic or crossover that I've ever seen!! I love this series of Jean Auel and hope you keep writing this one ^^.
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