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| LuSo 2008-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseWell he's drifting off to sleep when she's just warned him not to, he's just asking for trouble :) Great story, i enjoyed it. |
| catseyebow 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseokay having serious deja vou with this story but liked it nonetheless! |
| Rangerbaldwin 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseBren Ren- Clever clever clever! *sque* That was SO COOL what you did with the former dialogue of Pete. So perfect. I also think you did great with the little girl from Grace. You're a master at this. And as Jack said to Paynan in 100 Days, More please. Rangerbaldwin |
| i.m. nell 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI like your version of these episodes! |
| SJAuthor 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI love the concept; some of it was a little forced, with the mirrored dialogue, but it was fantastic to se a much better spin on events! |
| Momm2five 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseBren, this is great. If only!! Lovethe way you kept the same eps and what was happening, but no mention of potato head! LOL! Great fic! |
| Dreaming of Jack 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abusewow. LOve the romance- why didn't that all happen with Jack instead of jerk Pete.. wonderful. and a tense, exciting ending.. |
| Disneynut 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseIloved the story. What can I say, I'm into happy endings. I see at least a couple more plot lines going on here. I say keep it up. |
| usafcmycloud 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseAwesome read!! |
| Thara June 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I've always wished that it would be Jack instead of Pete in that episode ... So you've made my wish become true ... THX |
| kinnik72 2007-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is much better than Chimerra. If only TPTB wrote it this way. Too late. Anyway, I did enjoy this. Thank you very much Bren |
| Harm Marie 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. |
| BettyHall223 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! Terrific writing. |
| sg-1fanintn 2007-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI see your muse is back. Glad to hear it! This is a lovely story. I really enjoyed it. Now, come back home to the thread. |
| Liery 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseOh damn! That's it? Nothing more, nothing? :( I really LOVED it, one of the best fics dealing with Grace! Simply... awesome! :D |