quite liked this. good story.

Koolness! Yeah, we are going to be okay.

Thanks for sharing!

Are you kidding with your apologies? This is great. And I'm glad you ended with Rodney.

Wishing you happiness in your new home and I *do* hope you write more. :)

This was wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing. I loved that episode, and the aftermath would have been so ** Sheppard and everyone else.

Really good story, very emotional and touching! I liked your approach to the characters; it was certainly different from what I think their behaviour was like but it was well thought-out and well executed, therefore plausible and absolutely fine with me.

I especially loved the way you portrayed Carson and Ronon's relationship with Sheppard afterwards. And the final scene between Rodney and John was very good as well.

Thank you very much for writing this!

I loved this... Why oh why couldn't TPTB include something like this in the episode instead of just ending it where they did? Thank you for writing this :)

Excellent ending with a nice, clean wrap-up. And an excellent story.

Stop apologising and just accept that you finished the story well. You didn't intend it to be a thriller, more of a character/characters study - in which case you succeeded. So - no more apologising!

Thanks for the update! Don't stop now - doing a great job!

Great chapter, loved how you portraied Rodney in this one. Would love to read about the scene they would make.

Wonderful ending to an excellent story! I really enjoyed reading your take on Common Ground, it was cool twist writing from the other characters POV and how they felt about what happened to Sheppard. Great job and I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

“ Cos a healthy dose of Wraith-sucking is always good for the skin. And to make it even better, you do it three times a day. And in the unlikely event that you survive, you get a free Wraith friend."

Had a really weird image involving TV commericials when I read that...

well they say trouble comes in 3's i guess you have proof of that now sorry. great way to close the story :)

No apology necessary. RL can be very unforgiving. But...Good things come to those...well, you know how it goes! I, for one, didn't mind waiting. I think you did a great job on this last chapter--John and Rodney's conversation at the end was wonderful!
This is a nice alternative viewpoint to Common Ground--and one which you wrote very skillfully.

Oh, a great chapter! But yes ... Rodney next, please.