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MssWriter
2009-10-29 . chapter 15
Well... I definetly think that wasnt the most creative ending but still good chapter!
MssWriter
2009-10-29 . chapter 13
My oh my! Now... usually i just wait til the very end of th stories that are completed but... Dear me this chapter is amazing! I definetly didn't expect the story to go this way... I was guessing that it was going to be a Oh Derek I love you forever! Kiss mee! Not saying i don't enjoy those kind of stories... But! Needless to say well done :)
MssWriter
2009-10-28 . chapter 7
Ahh great story so far. Im taking a break for tonight so I can read more tomorow! Cant wait...:D
shadow-chickhottie101
2009-10-02 . chapter 15
To Sam's man crush and fugly hat, to having to shower practically together, to Tracy, and the fight with Derek, Abby and Nora. It was fantastic. I laughed, and wanted to cry, and laughed again, then was shocked at twists. It was truly a good story.
Amorekristall
2009-07-02 . chapter 15
well I personally loved the end :)
the story was cool but I also thought it was going a bit odd and wondered where it was all going lol.
But yeah I loved the ending, it was,in my opinion, the best way to end the story haha :P keep up the good work!! :]
Amorekristall
2009-07-01 . chapter 6
ROFL ok this chapter was just so awesome,
I was cracking up when you added yourself and your friend as the dasey fans and all the pursuing lol it made my day hahahaha
awesome story! I love it!!
and yesh, dasey rules! >:D lol
LindsaylovesPacey
2009-06-25 . chapter 15
This story was HILARIOUS! It made me laugh and freak out and cheer all at once! I loved it...and I added you to my fave authors. Plan on reading your other fics...Have a great night!
DisforDasey
2009-02-24 . chapter 15
Yay! A happy ending! I love happy endings.
Personally I have absolutely no problem whatsoever with the ending; I loved it! It wasn't very happy until... BAM! Everybody wakes up, it was all a dream, Derek and Casey get their happy ending! So yes, I loved it!
Wonderful story! I think my favourite chapters were 2 and 3 because chapter 2 was really funny (seriously, it was hilarious) and chapter 3 was funny but also sweet. Anyways, great job!
DisforDasey
2009-02-24 . chapter 14
But, but but... It has to be happy! Happy endings are the best! If this story does not end happy then I will get absolutely no sleep at all tonight. I'm very pro-happy.
Nonetheless, great story so far, only one chapter left!
DisforDasey
2009-02-24 . chapter 13
Aw! Poor Derek! I feel so bad for him... I wanted to strangle Noel for a bit.

Anywaze, fabulous chapter! You're an amazing writer.
DisforDasey
2009-02-24 . chapter 12
1) Aw! He loves her!
2) Er oh... Who was that?
3) That Tracy person is really... I don't even know how to describe her. But she's important to the story, so that's good...
4) Awesome job! Thanks :)
5) I really want to find out who that was! I think I will go see now.
DisforDasey
2009-02-24 . chapter 11
Huh. Interesting! And by interesting I really do mean interesting. Intriguing. Fantastic.
What will happen next? I don't know. Let's go see!
DisforDasey
2009-02-24 . chapter 10
Oh, gosh, that was awesome!
Fainting people always make me laugh.
"She popped up and struggled to pull a ** over her head." I think this is the funniest typo I have seen all day. The exact same typo happened in my English class last year...
Anyways, great job and I am going to end this review now because I need to find out what happens next!

And the part about Derek and Casey having sex freshman year... awesome!
DisforDasey
2009-02-24 . chapter 9
OMG, that's horrible! Why would somebody do that? I'm so sorry that had to happen, I really hope they find whoever did that!
DisforDasey
2009-02-24 . chapter 8
“I am really glad you are not my real brother….or this would suck.” Ha, that line was funny.
I'm excited to read this 'Book Forty-Two' chapter so I will go do that now...
Great job BTW!
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