i liked it-its probley the first ive read that had seifers point of view during the game-whch of course is spiffy as hell!

Righteousness. So much done in the name of good . . .

There is no such thing as going too far, my friend. I admire your passion and vivid language. If people didn't like this or something they probably didn't understand it. Personally I thought it was good.

Wow, that was beautiful... You have such a talent for writing ^^ Thank you for sharing!