This story made me cry, it was so sad. Everything is really nice, except I don't think Bellatrix would ever admit to Andromeda that she was hurt. Still, this was beautiful.

so sad. i'm tearing!

I want to feed Bellatrix to a pack of rabid monkeys for all the pain she's caused so many characters. I HATE Bellatrix; probably even more so than Voldemort himself. Anyway, you are an awesome writer.
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-The Stupid Crazy Insane Idiotic Weirdo known as Tassel630
-Please don't respond to this review-

I really liked it!
Its interesting to think of what Bella and Dromeda were like when they were kids...

this oneshot was really deep and intense and i really liked it. if i had a FFN account i would definately add you as a favorite author... i love your writing!

Wow, this was fantastic (I'm trying to use different words than great and awesome)

Wow.
When you were telling me about this, it sounded cheesy - cause you said like, she gets followed in a big dark alley or something :P

But I really, really loved this. It's like, you actually get an insight into what their childhood was probably like, and...

Migod, this is so, so sad. My eyes are starting to prick.

:3 Well done, I love your fics.

Wow Huffie... this was magnificent!
I really liked it a lot... these are two characters I don't read much about, but I'm glad I read this story!
It was so dang good.
I like how you said Bella blamed Andromeda because she chose Ted over her own sister. It may be twisted, but it is somewhat logical, at least for a Death Eater.
Anyway, great work!
Keep it up!

-Skye

I never thought about Bellatrix ever being anything except a bitch, but you've humanized her a bit with this piece. Is your theory that her prejudices corrupted her or that she was hurt by Andromeda turning from her to Ted Tonks? I'd be really interesting if you added something regarding Bella's infatuation with Voldemort too. I always imagined Bellatrix would have been abusive as a child too, sort of a bossy type (Hermione on steroids, I suppose). This was a really interesting psychological study of a budding sociopath. Have you ever thought of doing anything with Andromeda's feelings after she knows that Bellatrix killed her only daughter? That would be interesting too, I think. You ought to consider it. You do this sort of thing quite well.

The imagery of this is beautiful, I can see it playing in front of me like a film

Just a comment - you say stuff like "do not" and "you will" instead of don't and you'll and I was wondering if it would flow better if you contracted them (which means put the apostrophe in if you didn't know - I just learnt that do not becoming don't was called a contraction on English last week :D)

But it's really wonderful otherwise.

(P.S. I wonder what a bunch of rabid monkeys look like.)

I liked it =D. I love the way you delve into the child hood character of Bella there, it was so moving to see the child, not evil, but loving, caring and someone to look up to for Andromeda, and then the harsh reality of the adult Bellatrix, the one that causes pain and mayhem. I espeically love the last segment there, with Bella letting Andi live... but encasing herself further into her own insanity...

I love that Bella's turn to the darkside was also related to Andi herself, going off with a 'Mudblood'. Perfect.

Definatley going on the favourites list. Thanks for sharing ^^

aw, i love the flashback part, its what i truly believe bella was like b4 hogwarts.

Cool Story! Liked the flashback part. But just because i liked the story does'nt mean i will forguve you for all you've done to Sirius! Lol!

Angel

wow. that's really good, i loved it

this made me cry!! i dont believe it!! fics dont make me cry very often... GREAT WORK! into my favs this goes... please keep writing and make the world of hp a more interesting one!!

a HUGE fan of your fic,
anahitathebooklover