Reviews for Eyelashes Falling

Siobhan 2008-03-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery well written, neat idea to connect those characters that way... this was an absolute heartbreaker.
In Darkness Is Light 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was beautifully written and I like the way you incorporated Tenzo and Genma. I thought the whole thing was brilliant, especially the last line; now that was a great ending. There's just one little thing I'd like to point out though: [feint, but still there despite everything.] The word feint should be spelt with an 'a' instead of an 'e'. The word the way you spelt it means 'a fake'. Other than that, I have no more praise or constructive criticism to offer because it was a beautiful piece of fanfiction. Great job.
Hikari Minamoto 2007-11-20 ch 1,	abuseIt's a beautiful story, and I wish more people would have read and/or reviewed it. You really evoked a lot of emotion, and personally, I love sad stories that make you actually FEEL something. I think you did a great job with this, so kudos! Keep up the good work.
silje 2007-10-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh my god I love this.
loverofallthingschocolate 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abuseI love the last line!! Brillant piece^^
Tsukikari Kitsune 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abuseIt was truly lovely. Although in the beginning I was confused on who this was about, by the middle I had finally figured it out and really started to enjoy it. It's very real, and raw, and I absolutely loved it. The fact that you write well(it's so rare these days!) really sent it home. I loved it!