Man, I love this story! And like, the strange friendship between all of them. I like how Hattori was the victim (because somehow, he tends to be the victim in some cases [or a lot of cases XD], and like, how Kaitou 1412 (I just like typing "KID" that way XD) just normally walked away in the end with his awesome cape. O_O I really liked that touch. And how Kaitou was serious about not using his thefts as an excuse for murder. That was just great! =D Please type more like this soon! ^_^

kya~!
xDD
GOD I LOVE THIS!
xDD
Poor Heiji, but it was... worth it...
Well, no pain no gain, right~?
x3

I liked this. Gotta love Hattori getting into trouble, and Kaito and Shinichi fishing him out. ^^

I like this. I like it a lot. I hope you continue soon!

Keep writing!

-Yinnie

Yoshimi- And 12 minutes later...

Yoshimichi- ...we find the murderer on the road...

Yoshimi- -TRAMPLED!-

Yoshimichi- ...by his own horse.

Yoshimi- YATTA! GO 怪盗キッド!

Yoshimichi- Go 'what'?

Yoshimi- 怪盗キッド

Yoshimichi- Which says?

Yoshimi- Kaitou Kid

Yoshimichi- 'Don't be a jackass'

Yoshimi- 'Shut up, Kid'

-Yoshimi Kurosaki (truce)
-Yoshimichi Kurosaki (truce)

*claps hands*
Nicely written! I really liked the ending. [:

No offence, It's interesting! ^ ^