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| Darkesong 2008-07-07 ch 3,  | abuseDear lord, that was outstanding XD Never had considered the pairing, but you make it work very well. I love how you've infused Swoop with such personality...most characterizations of him pretty much end at his unique speech patterns. And Hide X3 so concerned about his honor, and how you draw attention to his history and experience |
| Illucien 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseOh...wow. Lovely plot, I love Swoops character and the way you write Ironhide's accent. Very odd pairing, but works well when you write it. |
| dark kitsune 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuse...I think I just found my new OTP |
| dark kitsune 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseLove it |
| dark kitsune 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseHoly smokes this is great! Certainly an odd pairing...but Ironhide is awesome and Swoop is a sweetheart. You've made it work - I'm amazed and elated. ^^ |
| Silveriss 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseI like the emotion you brought into this chapter. I really liked your emphasis on Swoop's reactions and the fact that they love each other for everything they are. The inclusion of Swoop's Dinosaur mode was phenominal. You really pulled that together. ^^ |
| Bluebird Soaring 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseI don't review often as I should, but you've really sold me on this pairing/story and you write it so well =) Cute ending too...makes me think that Hide is showing off a bit. Good for him =) But how does Swoop top that? LOL |
| AMAPADME 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseOh my God I love these two! It IS a VERY good thing they did not do this in the air or they would be dead. It makes me wish I had telepathic communication with my love. |
| Dragon of Dispair 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseoh nice. you had perfect timing on this one -- i woke up today with a headache and thinking that despite being saturday, it was going to be a horrible day... well i still have the headache, but this made my day infinitely better. thanks. swoop and ironhide are just so cute and fuzzy (though as robots they lack any sort of physical fuzz) together as you write them. swoop shares his love of flying. it's always interesting to see what kind of effects the field bond have on the two of them. "just call me" showed a few mostly showing what it was like when disrupted -- the interference from the song on ironhide's end -- while this showed what it was like normally for them. bumblebee's little transmission to swoop was adorable. something tells me almost everyone in the ark is going to laughing about that soon. ironhide's though wondering if alt mode interfacing was like a bondage fetish made giggle so hard i totally forgot about my headache. and swoop forgot his name for a bit -- that whole little exchange was awesome. wonderfully done. |
| Povlyn 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseLovely absolotely lovely and for that plot what plot comment... YOU'VE GOT PLOT!! AND ITS BRILLIANT!! :D |
| Dragowolf 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseWOW! That was amazing! Ironhide must be very talented to make Swoop forget all that. LOVE IT! And I love the flying part! THAT WAS COOL! More stories please! May you could do another with Bluestreak in it? PLEASE! Till a new update I'm going to go and reread your old stories! They are wonderful! |
| lazeee an demented 2008-04-25 ch 3, | abusecute |
| AMAPADME 2008-03-24 ch 2, | abuseOh I liked this story. I was checkingout you page to see what else you wrote.I am going to read some more too. Is this story done,btw? it was very well written. |
| Teldra 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseCute! |
| Eerie Iri 2008-01-12 ch 2, | abuseThis was totally awesome!^_^ |