"He was an actor, after all. I can feign sleep."

I was laughing hysterically - and maybe inexplicably - at this bit. I mean, come ON Aubrey!

The first time I read this, I thought it was too mushy.

...

Then I went away and thought about it.

Then I read it again.

And I actually think you've got it just about right.

If it were me, I would've got them together in the middle of battle...

...but this way is good too.

Feel like updating your other LOM fic? I think you should. (hint, hint).

Lots of love and obsessive fangirlism,

Ella

laws of magic fanfic!

equals exciting!

yay!

aww, that's so sweet! Great job! thanks for sharing!

*Sighs dreamily*

This story is perfection; I

Great Work Again

Loved this story, and the reaction of the family as they discover Aubrey and Caroline asleep together on the bed.

"You have my wholehearted blessing", just perfect from Mrs Hepworth.

Stephenie

Finally...a Laws of Magic story! )

Very well done; the ending I've always wanted!