Reviews for The SOS Potter:

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ROBERT19588 2008-02-17 ch 6,	abuseGreat story. Please update soon?
Saetan 2008-01-07 ch 6,	abuselol nice :P
hemotem 2008-01-06 ch 6,	abuseAH! Dursley revenge is sweet =) now onto other matters of importance hehe pranking =) How about hogwarts hehe that would be the place to strike next lol
R 2008-01-06 ch 6, anon.	abuseOh yes, If any military faction on this planet and probably others as well, ever get wind of that 'Medical Rejuvenation Teleport System’ you can bet your bank roll they will stop at nothing and no expense will be too high to find your ship. So. . . as SG-1 would say. "Watch Your Six!" lol Harry's morality is rather astonishing regarding his Uncle, but I guess it was those Captain Kirk inspired life lessons of open minded wisdom and sense of direction that makes him do the right things. I really like this story. Well done. R
hyperfuzzy 2008-01-05 ch 6,	abusehe shudda tryed to turn them inside out!
one-village-idiot 2008-01-05 ch 6,	abusenicely done. Can't wait for an update.
one-village-idiot 2008-01-04 ch 5,	abuseDang... this is an awesome story. When I read the first chapter, I thought it'd be a crossover with a sci-fi category (like stagate, starwars, etc.), which are mostly good (especially the stargate crossovers). But this is pure sci-fi with a slight crossover. Amazing. Concgrats. I've put this story on both favorites and story alert. I'll need to see the rest of your work to see whether I should put you on auther alert. I can't wait for your next chapter. Makes me wish I had time travel. Unfortunatley, I don't, so I have to wait. See ya soon (hopefully)!
Matt101 2008-01-03 ch 5,	abuseCool story, keep it up :)
NInjAlt 2008-01-01 ch 4,	abuseInteresting read.
R 2007-12-29 ch 4, anon.	abuseI am surprised at the depth of your creative imagination and technology. Your writing pace and style seem more directed to an adult audience, as you have mentioned. However, I think your creation will go way over most of the heads that read stories on this Fan Fiction forum. Many of those that read and like the story will not quite know what to say in a review and will likely either try to pick it apart or opt out of reviewing altogether, so don't depend too much on that aspect here. You should consider writing this as an independent, stand alone story having nothing to do with the Harry Potter universe, as you mostly use imaginative, created technology instead of Magic anyway. A few minor changes that refer to JKRs stories or her creative Magic and characters and this is a publishable, stand alone, Science fiction story. I only found this story by way of a young family members recommendation as I am in Aerospace Engineering and she thought I would find this of interest to me. Your creation is so close to some truths I am aware of, that I can't help but wonder if you work in the same industry as I or have some inside information or perhaps it is just, insight? If it is just insight then you have a very creative imagination and either way, keep writing and find a good editor to clean up some of your 'tense' misplacements and a few other minor deficiencies. Well, consider my suggestion of altering this story for publishing. R
Paul 2007-12-24 ch 4, anon.	abuseI like it, it's great so far!
hyperfuzzy 2007-12-24 ch 4,	abusehey! I want a space ship tlike that but a tad bit different like more un-sausory looking...yes that is a word! and my space suit would be blue and silver! daydream...right! um please please please please please update son
hemotem 2007-12-23 ch 4,	abuseHORAY! An update I was getting worried that this story was not going to go much further =( Bad reviewer I know but I am glad to see that it has been updated thank you very much. Now for the actual review part of this. Great story I do hope that whole Magical world does get off their hind ends and do something that is right instead of what is easy. Also I would hope to see more inventions from harry and Fred and George and maybe even plop a few from Dobby would be a good thing =) Here is to seeing more of this wonderful fic soon. Cheers Hemotem
Steve's Place 2007-12-23 ch 4,	abuseOn behalf of "demented-koala:" I have replace this reviewers original review, or it would have been erased by removing the posting I made as a seperate story. Steve - From demented-koala: Ep:2/Chapter 4: This is an unusual story and I'm interested in seeing where you take this. I'm quite enjoying it so far...
gaul1 2007-11-14 ch 3,	abusegreat story, byes

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