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| elfmaiden4legs 2008-05-31 ch 1,  | abuseLoved it! |
| BlackWolfHowling 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI find it interesting to see that you have written the same basic story from both sides of the spectrum. Watson angry after three years of ignorance and Watson knowing the whole time that he was giving 'Lies of Ommission.' And the truly amazing thing is, they're both completely believable! It takes true talent to pull such a thing off, and you my friend, have got it. |
| rabidsamfan 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like this! What a neat AU notion. Thank you for writing it out and sharing! |
| KCS 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseO, I like it! Seriously, the Final Problem has always been one of my least favorite stories because of the awful ending. I truly enjoyed it - please write more SH fics! |
| Mysterylover17 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseFantastic story! I love the drama and you gave "The Final Problem" a very interesting twist. Great work, I must say! =) |
| Anonymous 2007-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseNicely done! |
| PECARD NCC1701 2007-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseGREAT |
| LA Suka 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseI think this works great! This would have been a much better outcome for sure. Wouldn't have had that big dramatic scene in Empty House when Holmes returned where Watson fainted but I'm sure Conan would have been able to come up with something better then. |
| KaizokuShojo 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. Not bad at all; you did quite a fair job. ^^ I would, however, suggest a few spelling corrections, but that's easily dealt with. |
| Susicar 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseYou come back! I liked this fic. God know how i wish the Reichenbach affair had happened thus (The poor Doctor could spare such great sadness). Thank for sharing, and i hope you can write more soon. |
| StrangeBlaze 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseVery good! You really managed to capture the tension of the moment as well as Holmes' conflicted feelings. I almost wish it had happened this way. I still think it was very cruel of Holmes to deceive his friend for three years, especially since Mary died during those years. This is a nice alternative history. |
| Kawaii Nekomimi 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseAw! Sweet! |
| VHunter07 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseBravo! That is the first Final Problem rewrite that I've ever really enjoyed. Thanks so much, it was great & very believable. I hope to see more of your works soon! |
| Valinor Sunset 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI really like this! Very nice alternate ending. |
| MoonlitPuddle 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseVery nice and thoughtful... interesting alternate ending. ^_^ |