Reviews for Bad PickUp Lines

AkaiKurai 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseOh geeze, I've heard guys have contests with pick-up lines. Who can make the more corniest. I'll have to remember these next time XP Yay for spontaneous plot bunnies! Of Doom!
Shiznap 2007-10-12 ch 1,	abuseNice. :D I've never read this pairing before, but you seem to have perked my interest with it.
Sweet Little Pirana 2007-09-26 ch 1,	abuseI really liked that story. (gives tumbs up) ^-^
V 2007-09-09 ch 1, anon.	abusegasping for air, terrible wheezing An-wheeze-aphylactic-hack shock! Need ep-rasp-i-coughcough-nephrine. injects self, breathing returns to normal That was a close one! But, in all seriousness, that was actually pretty good, in the sense that it made me cringe and laugh at the same time. Goatees and card castles scare me now, thanks for that. -The Not Very Enigmatic V
PendragonU 2007-09-08 ch 1,	abuseHA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! OMFG! ROFLMAO! Very funny. I am laughing still as I write this and am getting wierd looks from the other people here at the library. Which makes me laugh even harder because they have no idea what is so funny. Write more like this, it is so cute and it is a good streach for someone who makes such serious stories.