Reviews for Out of Element

Reviews For: Out of Element

Rhae 2008-05-11 ch 7,	abuseMELMELMELMEL. UPDATE. cough Please. Because you've haven't updated in... Months. Since January FIRST. THE FIRST DAY OF THE YEAR. Which was a long time ago. And it's getting really exciting! So, yeah. Please update.
cheekylildevil 2007-10-03 ch 6,	abuseyay, you updated! YIPPEE! great chapter, I really like the bit just before the end bit you know what i mean, this bit: he trail was barely visible, going up through the dense forest. Everywhere, trees were turning colour, red, gold, and brown leaves dropping to the ground. These leaves were crunched by the feet of thirteen people as they made their way single file along the path. Thadd paused, glancing around. Rocks surrounded them on all sides, blocking out wind and unwanted passerby. “We should be okay to stop here.” With a concerted groan, everyone sank onto rocks or the ground, giving weary feet a rest. Steele rubbed the instep of his left foot. “How long have we been walking for?” Haley glanced tiredly at her watch. “Seven hours.” Everyone looked up as each Defender shivered simultaneously. The six RaDosians exchanged glances. “Someone else using Di-Gata stones just passed through a portal in this world,” Erik said, fingers already tapping on the controls of his gauntlet. Jake watched him curiously. “Can you tell who? By using their sigil energy whatchamacallit?” “Normally, yes. But these people . . . they don’t [Ihave[/I an energy signature.” Rion frowned. “But they still use Di-Gata stones. How does that work?” Mel snapped her fingers. “They’re not truly RaDosian!” Twelve heads turned her direction. “There’ve been more and more people I’ve seen that I can’t pick up a sense from. They were [Icreated[/I by people outside of RaDos.” Seth raised one eyebrow. “Created how? I thought only Greg could do that?” “Character bios,” Charlin broke in. “There’s a site on the Internet where people can make up their own Di-Gata characters to move around a virtual RaDos. I should know, I created it! And with the number of characters we’ve accepted . . . .” She waved a hand, trailing off. Melissa’s eyes widened. “So if OCs are getting through into our world as well . . . is there any way to tell which ones?” “Just the sigils they use, and that there are three of them. First one uses Yan and Altas, second: Yin and Dako, and third: Dako and Yan.” “Let’s hope we don’t run into them,” Kara said, looking back the way they had come. which has some rally good material in it keep up the great work Indi
cheekylildevil 2007-09-21 ch 5,	abusegreat chapter mel16 and greg sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-gets old, dirty socks shoved in mouth pulls socks out of mouth you said it yourself points to the bottom line of the fic Indi
Rhae 2007-09-17 ch 4,	abuseLol, MSN is so fun. And I probably would never sleep if a Defender was under my own roof. And I'd just die of shock it it was Erik. Dies of shock Shocking find? What shocking find? Did the Defenders all abandon us? That would be so mean... XD
cheekylildevil 2007-09-17 ch 4,	abuseda da da da, da da da da great chapter, I would hate to share a room with seth or adam, they're the loudest snorers in the history of my imagination please write more, I'll give you a cookie :) can you put this onto indi
Rhae 2007-09-10 ch 3,	abuseSupposed-to-be-chapter-1-review: Sounds like a... AU fanfic. I like Au's. You can fiddle around with them all you want! Supposed-to-be-chapter-2-review: Seth snores, lol! So does Adam! And me, just to stay on topic, XD. Chapter 3 review: You'll notice almost everyone has a sibling... Like Inky has her brother, Matt has a sister and Thadd has... I dunno... a cousin, perhaps? Either way, keep it up! I wanna read more! Update soon please!
cheekylildevil 2007-09-10 ch 3,	abuseyay, more DGDness I can only hear about DGD in forums and here now, they've cancled DGD in Australia at the moment, threans CN with knife or at least they've replaced it with naruto. are those my cookies that you're handing out? Cause you've updated so quickly you get popcorn, If you need any help with this story feel free to ask. QUOTE TIME 1.“Sorry about that. Annoying brother. You know how it is.” “Actually, I know how it is with an overprotective brother,” Kara said, smiling. “Yes, I’m always yelling at Erik to let you live your life. He never hears me through the TV screen,” Charlin mused. “Anyway, follow me, your bed’s all set up in my room.” nice one 2.“Matt, why is there a weird-looking clone of you in the hallway?” she asked. great job 3.There are protections that come within a metre of your house,” Adam explained. “Only people with pre-registered sigil energy signatures can get through them. And they’re reinforced with Wizard magic.” “Oh-kay then . . . .” you deserve lots of appluse Indi
sigilstorm 2007-09-09 ch 2,	abuseWhoot! I raised my hand! )(Is feeling so special)( Yeah... Anywho, looks like Greg is evil. Again. And again, YAY! I'm there! Whoot... That's awesome.. Yay... Yeah, like always, Her Sij-ness had sugar. Whoot. ... Uh... Update soon.. And.. Um... YAY I WAS IN IT!! I GOTTA ASK A QUESTION!! ... Yay sugar.
SteeleCratos 2007-09-08 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful. Wonderful story, the details flow, and the plotline is excellent, if not a bit cheesy. But that's ok. Keep it up. Lol Steele is going to be grumpy because of Seth's snoring. -Peace-
cheekylildevil 2007-09-08 ch 2,	abuseyay, more, because you updated so quickly you get virtual fudge, Doesn't greg know that talking to yourself is the first sign of insanity?, I cannot wait for more, this is amazing. holds out plate more please
cheekylildevil 2007-09-08 ch 1,	abuseyay, more DGD, yippee, because you've written a new story I shall offer you a cookie, we have- butter, chocolate, chocolate chip, tripple chocolate, death by chocolate, macadamia, peanut, walnut, pistacio, m&m or, cookie dough

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