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Arashihawk 2008-08-18 ch 1,	abuseI thought this story was great before, but after finally reading the Bleach Manga and your new story, it's even better. I like how Kenshin and Kaoru helped Urahara heal and put himself back together, and how he got his shop started. Of Yoruichi is always a nice touch.
The Violent Tomboy 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abusePretty cool. Kenshin as a shinigami? Nice...And I love how everybody is portrayed here.
ferryboat George 2008-02-26 ch 1,	abuseThis story was interesting the first time I read it, when I didn't know anything about Bleach, but it was much more enjoyable after I'd read the first storyline of Bleach so knew some of the characters. I can now better appreciate the skill you always put into your crossovers.
Falling Right Side-Up 2008-02-01 ch 1,	abuseWow! Very original and nice. I wish you wouldn't leave it as a one-shot. Develop it more and have the Himura family pop in once in a while. Nice job.
Doctor Kiba 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abuseThat is awesome! One of the best I love how Kenshin and all of them fit into it.
S. T. Nickolian 2007-12-22 ch 1,	abuseThat's pretty good! XD I love it! The Kenshin thing was really good. Great job!
LoquaciousQuark 2007-12-03 ch 1,	abuseUrahara! Lovely crossover. Nice to see he wasn't always as accepting of his banishment; it had to have been hard for him, and yet you hardly ever see fic about it. Great job.
Isis the Sphinx 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abuseNicely done. I know nothing about Bleach, but this was still wonderfully written. Keep writing!
evilteddybear 2007-10-16 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful and wonderful and well written. You managed also to tie in the (song? poem?) well. A hard feat. The length(?) of the scenes felt irregular, but not in a really bad way. Love the Kaoru portrayal. Good metaphors. Love Urahara and Rurouni Kenshin to begin with, so good job there, too! THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME AND EFFORT! Since I've read your (was it "Blades of Blood") series more than twice already, as well as your Rurouni Kenshin/Gargoyles crossover you can probably expect me to be watching you! Just in case you hadn't noticed, your stories are on the favorite stories lists of many great RK authors. Feel proud and appreciated 'kay? You deserve it.
Rachelle Ryan 2007-09-28 ch 1,	abuseI made a promise a long time ago to review all of your stories. Now I've lapsed some (on occasion) but I always try and keep my word. This was a pretty interesting teaser considering I only have a vague knowledge of the Bleach universe. Death and swordsmen always make for interesting times, and I sense some ahead here.
Kokari 2007-09-20 ch 1,	abuseyauy! fun and crossover! that was good writing, and well punctuated, thanks so much for writing, keep up the good writing!
lembas7 2007-09-10 ch 1,	abuseDamn! Nice! So, yes, I have been disgustingly silent - for this I apologize; allow me to review. Okay, only vague familiarity with Bleach lingers, but I do love the way the song "Hallelujah" was tailored in here; I felt that was your inspiration, really - and the pieces that flowed from each section of the lyrics kept the initial tone of that segment of the mosaic so well, that it really was just a lovely reading experience. Overall, I've been missing your lyrical writing, definitely, and getting another dose is just lovely! And the end ("victims - err, customers - of the day") made me grin like the Cheshire cat that's got the canary with cream. :)
Star Lin 2007-09-10 ch 1,	abuseglomps Vathara You're back. So very happy with this new story. I only have the first two volumes of the manga so I was a little spotty on who Urahara was. It wasn't until the shop that I realize who he was. grins I like the take on Kenshin in this. Will there be more? Will Ichigo get to meet Kenshin? wonders why their might be more to Ichigo's hair color then just being natural
omasuoniwabanshi 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseUrahara went to 1890s Japan to heal up? Great idea! I liked the way you connected Kenshin to the shinigami world as well. So Yoruichi was the infamous cat that stole the fish for dinner? Nice touch, as was her unrepentant attitude. Nice job of explaining how Urahara became a shopkeeper in Japan.
Bakageta 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseVery good! A very interesting way of looking at both of the series. The only potential problem was that some of Urahara's thoughts were close enough to the song lyrics that, if didn't know the song, I would have been confused. You're a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see more of your work. God I'm such a suck up... ~Bakageta

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