Oo, a very entertaining idea. Nicely pulled off.

I'm wondering when Kenshin became a shinigami. I mean, he was 8 when Sajiro Hiko found him (I totally slaughtered that spelling didn't I? ^^; ) and he seems to age normally...yeah, just curious.

I can see it though, quite well actually. Fabulous idea (have I mentioned? *sarcasm*)

I think I may come to hate you in time. I could never stomach Bleach before you started weaving your marvellous tapestries and here I am, re-reading the sodding manga because you made me think I hadn't caught what you clearly have caught in it, i.e. the characters. *SIGH*

Oh, well, such is life.

I know that you wrote the pre-qual (read it, loved it), but will you write more to this? say the meating between Ichigo and Kenshin?

lovely, as always!

I thought this story was great before, but after finally reading the Bleach Manga and your new story, it's even better. I like how Kenshin and Kaoru helped Urahara heal and put himself back together, and how he got his shop started. Of Yoruichi is always a nice touch.

Pretty cool.

Kenshin as a shinigami? Nice...And I love how everybody is portrayed here.

This story was interesting the first time I read it, when I didn't know anything about Bleach, but it was much more enjoyable after I'd read the first storyline of Bleach so knew some of the characters. I can now better appreciate the skill you always put into your crossovers.

Wow! Very original and nice. I wish you wouldn't leave it as a one-shot. Develop it more and have the Himura family pop in once in a while. Nice job.

That is awesome! One of the best I love how Kenshin and all of them fit into it.

That's pretty good! XD I love it! The Kenshin thing was really good. Great job!

Urahara! Lovely crossover. Nice to see he wasn't always as accepting of his banishment; it had to have been hard for him, and yet you hardly ever see fic about it. Great job.

Nicely done. I know nothing about Bleach, but this was still wonderfully written. Keep writing!

Beautiful and wonderful and well written. You managed also to tie in the (song? poem?) well. A hard feat. The length(?) of the scenes felt irregular, but not in a really bad way. Love the Kaoru portrayal. Good metaphors. Love Urahara and Rurouni Kenshin to begin with, so good job there, too!

THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME AND EFFORT!

Since I've read your (was it "Blades of Blood") series more than twice already, as well as your Rurouni Kenshin/Gargoyles crossover you can probably expect me to be watching you! Just in case you hadn't noticed, your stories are on the favorite stories lists of many great RK authors. Feel proud and appreciated 'kay? You deserve it.

I made a promise a long time ago to review all of your stories. Now I've lapsed some (on occasion) but I always try and keep my word.

This was a pretty interesting teaser considering I only have a vague knowledge of the Bleach universe.

Death and swordsmen always make for interesting times, and I sense some ahead here.

yauy!
fun and crossover!
that was good writing, and well punctuated, thanks so much for writing, keep up the good writing!

Damn! Nice!

So, yes, I have been disgustingly silent - for this I apologize; allow me to review.

Okay, only vague familiarity with Bleach lingers, but I do love the way the song "Hallelujah" was tailored in here; I felt that was your inspiration, really - and the pieces that flowed from each section of the lyrics kept the initial tone of that segment of the mosaic so well, that it really was just a lovely reading experience. Overall, I've been missing your lyrical writing, definitely, and getting another dose is just lovely! And the end ("victims - err, customers - of the day") made me grin like the Cheshire cat that's got the canary with cream. :)