yes, it is very weird.. Keep writing.

First, I'm not at all surprised that you're published. Your writing is that good.

This story wide (comprehensive) and deep (detailed and thoughtful). The plot is intricately constructed. The future seems to hold great promise for your protagonists, if it's ever completed.

Good work.
Mike

This is some crazy trippy **. Gimme some of that ** you're on! I love this story!

The ride continues to be wild.
Some of us like that.
I'm one of them.
Thank you. <3

Neat part, and got me worried about Kasumi there, as well as what this will mean for Ranma and Nabiki, and what all will be waiting for them when things get even more desperate.

Disregard previous review. Of course that doesn't sound like Ranma - it's supposed to not sound like Ranma!

I'm finding this to be a beautiful and original fanfic, well written. Congrats.
MIke

The first section of Chapter 1 (the nightmare) almost turned me off. I'm glad I persisted. You write well, and it's interesting so far.
However:
"Er... I don't know. It revealed some inner truth about something and foreshadowed something else... All I really remember is that when I pinched myself I knew I was dreaming and I woke up."

Is this Ranma talking? Inner truth? Foreshadowed? No dese, dat, dose or other mispronounciations? Or is it Ranko talking (you established earlier that she speaks better than he)? Either way, it jars.
Mike

In any case you did well

This is an incredible piece of fanfiction. Rich and complex, laugh out loud funny in places, deadly serious in others, both at the same time on occasion. I love it.

Woah it's still very confusing but very good as always also the pheonix down reference was brilliant and almost out of place but hey it's Nerima yaknow?

This is like...an AWESOME story! Love how Hoko shared her 'down'. Maybe she could use it on Mr. Tendo? Hoko is rapidly becoming one of my favorite characters.
Ciao,
Wes

"Feedback greatly appreciated."
How about garbled lyrics.
Annie mouse stakes bar my phone.
If you see Annie, lent my bow.
Feedbag greatly emaciated.

Interesting chapter,
Ciao

Phoenix Down? !facepalms!
Actually, I lol'd when I saw that. Although I guess resurrection in any form shouldn't be laughed at in circumstances such as these.

The backstory of the Iron Man is epic. Creepy, but epic.

Truly bizarre, but looking forward to the next chapter.

Interesting, but I think this may be getting a bit too dark and wacky. Of course, it could be partly that it has been awhile since I read the earlier chapters, but it seemed to become harder to "suspend disbelief" during this last chapter. Still, I am definitely looking forward to the update...