man i love stories like this! and i saw the pic u were inspired by. seriously u shud write either more chapters of this one or more stories cuz im definitely subbing. 5/5, 100% and everything else like that

I'm sure Link can handle it.

This is a very good story. Do you think you could do a fanfic that shows the scene where Tetra and Link made love?

This was really funny!
I think I have to agree, that WW Link seems a bit less mature than the others, and it really works in this story! And Aryll is so innocent, even when she's older. The crew is perfect too.

I wonder what that fanart is... ;)

This is a very good story. I would like to see the scene where Link and Tetra made love the night before and the rest of the scene where Tetra makes up with Link.

This site needs more stories about Link and Tetra as a couple, especially some where they make love.

Bwa-ha-ha-ha-ha! That was a great fic! You should do another one about Zelda! Ha ha ha ha! XD *dies laughing*

"The crew all chokes simultaniously on their chocolate cake..."

That was funny as freakin' hell.
5/5

dysFUNction is right XD. Good one.

I just love that last line that Aryll said, and I love this couple even more sinec I got "The Legend of Zelda: Phantom Hourglass" a few days ago. Awesome story!

that was so funny! especially the ending, great job. ^_^

lemon prequel! lemon prequel! im Inukage Ama Terasu on fanfiction! im too lazy to log on though...lemon prequel!

Zomg! That was so cute! I laughed quite a bit too. :) Keep up the good work.

~Omega~

This is an adorable story! there really isn't enough tetra-link love out there. this made my day :)
i wonder if you could email me the deviantart pic that inspired you? its fine if you cant, i just wondered.

Hehehe! Good! I love how calm everyone is as Link and Tetra go back and forth around their destinations in various stages of dress.
Especially like the last part. I can see Aryll's concerned face, like she looked in WW when she was trying to wake Link up...

TOTALLY awesome fic that made my day/night/early morning/WHATEVS. xD Above and beyond the sappy cliches that seem to dominate the Zelda community here, and yes, I see your point on the dynamics of their relationship. A few grammar/tense/spelling issues here and there, but the best part was how perfectly you captured the teen/first love melodrama, confusion, and misunderstanding. Thanks for writing, and oh, I'd be interested in seeing that DA fanart you drew inspiration from o_o