wow so well written and brilliantly in cloud's perspective I think that matches cloud exactly and what he would of been feeling afterwards.

This story draws you in close, immerses you in Cloud's thoughts... it's so perfectly in character for him to think this way. Truly, your writing style is impressive, and I could but wish to have such ability with words.

Oh, this one made me tear up a bit. T_T Such beautiful emotion, and the idea is marvolous. Its certainly something Cloud would worry about, with all of his jumbled up memories. You did a wonderful job!

Really sweet, and I could really understand where Cloud was coming from. The only thing was that the little fangirl in me kept pointing out that you got the Within Temptation lyrics wrong. xD
The last word in the second line you put should be "here," not "near." Gawd, I can't believe I know this...
I'm looking forward to your next story!

Really well done I could really feel his thoughts and feelings in this one. Good job
~Beeria