Beautiful, just beautiful! I read some Warhammer 40K fanfic about a girl dying in the arms of the rescue, this is the same although a bit less depressing. Just simply beautiful!

Great story.

Howdy and aloha!

That was a gripping opening with an intense flashback. The whole story was very moving.

I hope all is well. :)

Love, Alice

awesome, i love it

Damn! Nice one-shot. would like to see this develope to some thing more, but that's always up to you. Nice work.

Interesting take on a post-wedding story, and interesting on how things went with Ranma here, and like the idea that he and Nabiki might get together, though it'd be a rough start and rougher together imo. Nice one.

This was interesting, different, and I liked it. :)
Thou you know you have the makings of a great epic story if you wanted you could make something out of this. I would suggest that you continue this story it could be something great, for the idea that you wrote this on was a good one. But either way good job. :D

I like this. Song fics can be ify at best, but this went well.

A very moving one-shot that gives a depth to Ranma, and Nabiki, that is rare. Thanks for sharing.

very nice idea, and an original story. One of the best one shots I've ever read

Touching, and great work.

very cool! unless you plan this to be a cross with something I think you should leave this as a oneshot. It would make it So Cool that way.

Wow this would be an excelent base for a new American comic superhero ^_^

I can see how it was bugging you to get out. Short but Sweet. It was a great idea and short story.
It would be an interesting idea for a longer story more centered on Nabiki with occasional Ranma parts.

You made me feel something in this cold dead heart of mine hm do it again its nice to feel alive once in awhile.