That was very sweet but I would have wished you had not stopped there. ;) An update would be much appreciated.

Wow..what a wonderful story.please update soon :)

Very nice story...:) I have just seen the movie and I too am disturbed that there are so few stories for it. Very good. Thanks.

isn't that almost the same as the movie? oh well. still love it:]

OMG! That was one of the most romantic things I have ever read! Great job!

Wow. This is amazing.

I loved it. The writing was great and the character were written well. I too am looking for more BJ fanfiction after watching the movie (I LOVED IT!). Hope you write more!

Ah, that is so ridiculously wonderful to read :D The moment where those two finally admitted their feelings to each other was fantastic, and I think you pulled off the written portion of the scene very well. It's really too bad that the two of them didn't get their happy ending, but you're writing really gives me new hope, haha :)

This is so steamy. I love it. I swear I've read this before only it was written under a different name, an alias, perhaps? Please do more!

Aww, that was so cute. Its great to finally find a Becoming Jane fic, and I'm glad I found this one!
Really fluffy, well written, its great!

oh! very very lovely
it felt like i was watching the same scene over again...
its such a shame there is a low amount of becoming jane fans, because for me, it is the best love-movie ever...
please continue with the good work
see ya

Loved it

Yay, a Becoming Jane fanfic! I also want to see more of those, so thanks very much for posting this!

Yay. Glad you figured out a title. Awesome story.