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JJJ
2009-09-02 . chapter 1
Yay! Zuko is un artist!
dwelian
2009-05-27 . chapter 8
port FATE?! Ha, that smacks of sneakiness again. I have to tell you, I NEVER saw this coming. I figured Zuko was with the group to stay, so this had me almost fall out of my chair. I can't wait to see where you're going with this next!
dwelian
2009-05-27 . chapter 4
oh heck yeah! The whole scene with the crossdressing, I DIED. so funny! XD
wolf's lament
2009-05-16 . chapter 8
It's interesting that Zuko's leaving the group. Once again this was a really enjoyable 'Chapter.' Adding the pirates was quite original. I'm very much looking forward to reading the next 'Chapter.'
Spirit Fire 8
2009-04-14 . chapter 8
Wow. Major plot twist. I was not expecting that Ursa would show up!
Also, I enjoyed the moment in the last chapter when Aang lent Momo to Zuko as a request for Zuko to return. It really shows the depth to which Zuko has bonded with the group.
Spirit Fire 8
2009-04-14 . chapter 4
AHAHA! Sokka and the "strange looks"! Playing that kind of a prank, especially on Sokka, is totally something that Zuko would do. ^^
zutarababe
2009-01-11 . chapter 8
ah! no! ahahahahaha! zuko!
zutarababe
2009-01-11 . chapter 4
HAHAHAHAHA! THEY'RE GIRLS! HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!
zutarababe
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
aw... Aang's so sweet...
Tiugainn
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
I liked this unexpected little facet of Zuko's character. He also strikes me as a guy who would have preferred learning over serving tea, but with Jet proving a possible threat, I don't think he could have tolerated having Iroh away from his protection for so many hours at a time.
mystery writer5775
2008-11-20 . chapter 3
Reading back through random parts I'm starting to realize you've hinted at zutara for quite some time. And also this is so making me want to punch Aang!
Shadowhawke
2008-10-29 . chapter 8
Whoah, a very good plot-moving episode, I have to say. I can't wait to figure out what will happen with Zuko and his mother. Awesome work yet again.
Shadowhawke
2008-10-29 . chapter 4
Wow. This chapter was absolutely hilarious. No doubt you've gotten several reviews like this, but really, the situation was pure genius! Very, very funny, and I liked the little side bit between Zuko and Aang even though Aang upset (and understandably so)
Shadowhawke
2008-10-29 . chapter 1
This chapter... I loved the way you turned the little quirk into lifting the oppression from the characters and yet also forwarding the story. Very nice.
darkphoenixsoul
2008-10-08 . chapter 8
Yay! Zuko's off to find his mother! I liked it...again.
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