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| kirallie 2008-08-18 ch 6,  | abuseGood work! Blood thinners are definitly not fun, especially when you do manage to give yourself a cut. I did it while on them, stupid thing took 1/2 an hour to stop bleeding, good thing it was a relatively small cut. So the clots were from when he was dead or from being always cramped in the car? Good thing they got him to the hospital! |
| kuhekabir 2008-03-30 ch 6, | abuseLast one, liked this story too. Thanks for sharing :) |
| twinchaosblade 2008-01-23 ch 6, | abuseVery suspenseful and intense story! Your characterizations were lovely and perfectly reflected the protective but still banterfilled relation the brothers have. Thank you for writing this in your limited free time! |
| JenBurch 2008-01-19 ch 6, | abusehehehe Dean would never get sick of saving Sam :) I liked the line "Not in my lifetime" :) Great story! I didnt even realise I was finished! lol |
| JenBurch 2008-01-19 ch 5, | abuseMean! Mean! Mean! lol |
| JenBurch 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseI'm with you, poetic license is definitely needed in these things with medical stuff! I'm really interested to see where you're taking this... |
| JenBurch 2008-01-19 ch 3, | abuseI really hate stories like this because I cant just read a chapter and then head off and do something else - I just HAVE to keep reading! :) I loved that Dean kicked the door of the Impala shut! He needs to take that nurse and hang her upside down by her toe nails until she puts Sam in already! |
| JenBurch 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abuseOMG! I can just imagine the fear that Dean would have felt seeing his brother like that! ARGH! Gotta go, more words, more... must.. read... now! |
| JenBurch 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI could not imagine being in Sam's shoes right now, worried about his injuries and what they meant, that they might take the little time he had to figure things out to save his brother, that Dean was going to spend an eternity in hell with the demons they had killed over the years... and then to feel guilty for the deal to begin with but not be able to deal with the pain and fear of it because he didn't want to add pressure to Dean's shoulders again! Wow... I'm really looking forward to seeing s3, I can't imagine how they're going to get Dean out of this... there has to be some way! The boys, as you showed here, cant be without each other! There must be a way! Great first chapter, so much depth and angst in the characters, and very true to character... Dean standing there, dumbfounded, confident in his decision but worried about Sam... ...but has Dean stopped to think about how Sam's going to survive after he's gone? Whose going to protect him when Dean isn't by his side? Sam is going to be devastated! Okay, enough rambling... more reading! |
| Amy 2007-10-30 ch 6, anon. | abuseThat was really well written. I like how Dean didn't let his eyes off Sam. |
| thevigilante15 2007-10-26 ch 6, | abusegreat story! |
| pignapoke 2007-10-03 ch 6, | abuseI really liked the 'do you ever get tired of saving me' part. It was really intense and I could see Sam saying it. I really enjoyed this and it is a good place to stop, in my opinion. I think it's a good idea. And the sequel is going to be amazing. Make sure you let me know when you start it! You're a fantastic writer and you really show the relationship Sam and Dean have very clearly. Great job on the story! |
| pinkphoenix1985 2007-10-02 ch 6, | abusegreat ending!! |
| RhianaStar 2007-10-01 ch 6, | abuseyou are definitely going there... opened the door for a sequel... great! |
| kitty maire 2007-09-30 ch 6, | abuseVery well done...I really like the endless stories that can come from this idea. |