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Red One1223
2009-05-01 . chapter 10
I just finished reading this, but I have one question:...did you copy some of this from my fanfic? I mean, I know that you did post this before I did, but I didn't even know that someone else had like the same idea that I had, like what if the Guardians didn't understand each other, how does that work type deal. Anyways, I hope that you update soon!
A J
2008-12-12 . chapter 10
Oh, boy. Back to Meridian! Let's see how they fare now that there are four of them ...

"... and Grandma's grandma's Grandma's grandma's Grandma's gra ..."
"Breath, Hay-hay. Breath!"
"Whew! Thanks, Irma! Now where was I? Oh, yeah! Grandma's Grandma's ..."
Taranee just shook her head. It was gonna be a long night studying.

Heh, those girls ... Catch ya on the flipside, A J.
DayDreamer9
2008-12-10 . chapter 10
Wow, first Rune's Dad, now Hatsuki's brother; why are their family members being jerks to them? But what was with those dragons? That was cool ^^ Glad to see that you're back in action and I hope that you continue on with the good work ^__^
A J
2008-01-30 . chapter 9
"HA! I knew it!"
"Now what are you blathering about, Hay-hay. Did you find that site for our geography project homework yet?"
"Uh, not yet, Irma. I was just checking out that weird story site Taranee told us about last week. The one that talks about US."
"Oh brother. What next, our own fan site? A comicbook or a cartoon show?"
"I think your exaggerating, Irma. Besides, This isn't even about Witch. It's about the first Guardians. So far, there's this Egyptian girl, a druid, a redhead with a sword and the heart, and now their air sister has been found, and I think it's my great great great ..." (Muffled sound as Irma covers her mouth.)
"That's great, bookmark it for later. We really gotta finish our homework, Hay Lin. Now come on, ..."

Heh, those girls. We all loved it, G L, and can't wait to read more. Catch ya on the flipside, A J.
DayDreamer9
2008-01-13 . chapter 9
Oh my, how very interesting ^_^ Wait a sec...Lin? As in...Hay Lin's anscestor? o.O; Wow, that would really explain much, boy she sure showed him ^^ How will they recruit her, though?
The Crazy Talk Kid
2008-01-13 . chapter 9
Another cool chapter, I like the definition of the wind at the bottom but something like that could be said of most other elements... or women.
Nemrut
2008-01-13 . chapter 9
Seems like the Air is rooted in China, nicely done my friend.
A J
2007-12-09 . chapter 8
Hmph.
Tee-hee.

Bwa-ha-ha-ha!

Sorry, that was great, though. Candracar knows what these girls will end up like, (besides Mizu, of course,) but their early adventures sure bring back the feel of the show, G L.
Catch ya on the flipside, A J.
The Crazy Talk Kid
2007-12-04 . chapter 8
I hate it when the Yeti's do stuff like that, they are so immature sometimes. Cool. Kdh.
DayDreamer9
2007-12-04 . chapter 8
Wow, interesting and kinda sudden, but I love the transformation sequence XD So cool! Though I thought that Amandela and Rune were a lot closer than that. Hope to see more, though!
DayDreamer9
2007-10-22 . chapter 7
I like these Guardians ^^ I wonder when they'll be able to transform? When all of them are together, most likely ^^ I stil can't believe that that boy turned in his own sister "growls" At least that slavery guy didn't get Chankushept XD WRITE ON! XD
The Crazy Talk Kid
2007-10-19 . chapter 7
An interesting chapter, I wonder who sent the jackels though. I would have crushed the with toaster-bears myself. Kdh.
Nemrut
2007-10-19 . chapter 7
Demons of the Desert? Now that title sure woke some memories^^. another great chapter, nice interlude with the young Oracle only one thing confuses me, does those Anubis creatures mean Amendela has two Hearts as in her own, normal heart and The Heart of Kandrakar or The Heart of Kandrakar AND the Heart of Earth?

Hoping to see another chapter of Tsunami soon, hope you are fine with schoolwork now
DayDreamer9
2007-10-10 . chapter 6
Yipes! Poor Chankushept T_T I'm a klutz too, but she shouldn't have been whipped so badly just because she dropped a pot. "sniffles" I hope that they take her far away from that wretched place! She deserves better! Rock on, girls!! XD
DayDreamer9
2007-10-10 . chapter 5
Gr, Oak and Raynia make me so mad! I wanna beat them up!! Can I, can I, please? Heh, sorry, but them two are creeps and hope that they get what's coming to them. And now, I'm eagerly off to watch/read chapter 6 ^^
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