At first, I was hesitant. Many stories I'd read about Andromeda and Lucius were just too...unbelieveable. Your story was much, much different. It was very tragic and very, very believeable. I thought you did a great job - your word diction was excellent, The flow of your writing was consistent throughout and you seemed to have the characters down perfectly. I also loved the little 'symbolism' (for lack of better word) with Lucius always holding out his arm. It was fantastic! I felt so so so heart broken in the last chapter because of Lucius' thoughts and all. Wow. REally good. Favouriting this ... ! D

At first, I was hesitant. Many stories I'd read about Andromeda and Lucius were just too...unbelieveable. Your story was much, much different. It was very tragic and very, very believeable. I thought you did a great job - your word diction was excellent, The flow of your writing was consistent throughout and you seemed to have the characters down perfectly. I also loved the little 'symbolism' (for lack of better word) with Lucius always holding out his arm. It was fantastic! I felt so so so heart broken in the last chapter because of Lucius' thoughts and all. Wow. REally good. Favouriting this ... ! D

oh, that's so sad... i was crying my head off!

stupid ted. gr...:D

brilliant, once again. ;)

xoxox

well done you have succeded in creating a truly great fanfiction with good dialouge(sp) great charricters and a satisfying (if sad conclusion this is going on my faves

Oh, I like. I was a bit dubious when I saw the description, but the Andromeda/Lucius thing works well, and it's all pretty plausable. I loved childNarcissa as well. :)

Not a pairing I usually read..but you made this ship totally believable!

As much as I'm squeeing over Lucius/Andromeda and Ted/Andromeda, I can't help but feel that Ted/Andromeda was a little sudden. Like you could've put more detail into how they became close. Still, I like how you show Andromeda's conflicting feelings for Lucius, and their conversation about their future home is cute.

The title is totally appropriate for this pairing and the direction we know they're headed towards, but at least there's that "When there is love" part to keep Lucius/Andromeda shippers happy. I like how they weren't overly romantic and sappy, even when they were alone. The only thing that I find a little off is how quickly Andromeda calmed down after falling into the fountain, although I guess that since she is really in love with him, she'd keep the Voldemort issue in the back of her head for a while and just relish being with Lucius.

Andromeda as a Hufflepuff makes sense, but it's implied in HBP that she was in Slytherin.