wow this was totally awesome i love this you have to write another chapter or fic with Tobi and Dei i love them to bits ^^

i kinda didn't get it but it was good nonetheless

ugh, this is/was so nice I wish it would continue! It really feels like the start of something.

Gaah!! This story got me all teary eyed and i don't even know why!

nice

Oh, yummy.

Evil Tobi -is- fun. And I had fun reading this. (I don't feel sad when I read angsty or depressing fics. I feel happy. Especially if they're well written.)

I can't wait to read your AU. Honestly, I'm foaming at the mouth.

Love! -Cho

Aww...it's so sad...yet so sweet ;_;

Awesome job on this little ficlet, Ashes! I *really* liked it! ^^

ARHG...

Why is it that you make deitobi eat my brain!?

Sometimes i wonder about myself...

Awesome story!

nice. a little plotless, but still an enjoyable read. i mean jeez, they dropped that bomb on us hella chapters ago and still have elaborated. wtf!

haha, i definately like this fic. good pairing. and now that tobi's a bit evil, maybe he could accidently show his evil side to deidara and then be like 'oh, i didn't me it, lol'!

D: Aww man... I was all geared up to something good... and this is... ANGST! *dies*

I liked it though. You are an awesome writer!

:C

That, I think, is one of the best you've done to date. Nearly made me cry.

Will you try and continue this?

(by the way, why DID you name it after the Norse trickster?)

Vicious and beautiful-- I love your take on them.

Er...I don't know what to say...you've done better, really...Though I DO adore how you describe Tobi. He's a rather fun character, ne? Well keep up the good and write more!

A lovely way for you to integrate the new stuff into your favorite? pair. It was good.

Aww. :D