I really like how you write the boys. I could so see this being how things had happened between 4 years before the pilot and the pilot. You came up with a believable reason for them to stop talking and everything. This was really good.

This story is absolutely beautiful. I just cannot praise it enough. I loved how you wove original scenes into your fic and then let them weave their own magic spell into it and further embellishing your own story. A masterful stroke!
I read an earlier fic of yours- Sacrifice of the Heart and enjoyed it so much that I have you in my alerts.
I hope to read more of your writing.
Keep up the good work.

good job. that was a really good story...

wow. I love sammy, but sheesh that was harsh.. I'm sure he had his reasons...

Awesome story! You put the reader thru so many emotions right from the start! And poor Dean, he went thru so much with worrying about the fight from the beginning, losing his baby brother, and then to lose touch with him totally for two years when Sammy told him he couldn't handle their talking anymore. I look forward to reading your next story!

Hi I loved Jess and I've enjoyed reading this version of the Winchester's from the time Sam left for college. I didn't review each chapter because I just knew I had to reach the end first... fast...lol. I thought one of the most touching scenes was when Dean went to the bar and found his father and only after Dean told John that Sam was ok did his father finally relax.

Got to say that I am still mad at John at this point the way he kept Dean from going to Sammy, but it's nice to know he still felt the need to make sure Sammy was safe and is taking precaustions to ward off anything that could hurt him.--Now on to the next chapter!

Okay I just found this story and I know it has lots of chapters but I just got to comment here. John Winchester was sucn an a-hole to Sammy that I wanted to hit him in the face myself. How he could hurt his youngest that way is just beyond me! I know the man wants them to stay together so he could protect them, but in doing what he did, he did just the opposite and broke hi family apart!