I really liked this ending, but i'll wait until the alternate ending to tell you which one is my favourite. Anyway you did a really good job in this one. Besides i like open endings and i sure hope you do a prequel or sequel (or both ;D). Jin and Hwoarang's hate/friendship relation is really cool and you showed that wonderfully in this chapter.

Congratulations
Take care
Kari

cool chapter, i wonder where Xiaoyu is but i hope she's not with Bryan and Hwoarang. Anyway I hope that Bryan burns in hell XD for what he did to Hwoarang and Julia, but then again he's a cyborg so he won't burn, right?

you're doing great so keep up the good work.
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Kari

cool story keep it up ;] omgg julia dontt diee on mee TT stupid jung if i couid kill him i would

this chapter was great. an the cliffhanger is perfect. It makes us question if Hwoarang will be able to save Julia from that lunatic (no offense to Bryan...he rocks).

update soon
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karisan

It's going great so far. Good job. By the way, about the genocell and the devil gene, your ideas worked out fine, because it made sense. No one knows what Namco is cooking up about the genocell because in the games isn't mentioned much about it.
^.^

PS: I think you should write more than 2 more chapters...

Keep it up
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Karisan

Suspense...who will Hwoarang call? Well, i guess we'll have to wait, right?
Don't forget to update soon please.

PS: Hwoarang is really stubborn :P but he's great anyway.

Take care

Really great. keep up the good work. I'm definately going to read the next chapters ;P

^^

It's going great so far. I like the fact that you wrote so many details about the Blood Talon's activities. It's nice to see how Hwoarang tries to "hold the fort".

About the chapter with Jin and Ling, if you think it's not that relevant you shouldn't keep it. But since Jin is "an important piece" in Hwoarang's life...well anyway you're the writer so you're the boss. ;)

Great story, take care
Karisan

wicked update soon!

Wow, cool beggining. Cant wait till your next update! Keep up the good work.