I'm really lovin' this story. Please continue! :)

What I meant to say was a continuation, not a follow-up.

It may be a little late for me to say this, but you definitely need to make a follow-up to this.

I want to ask you something. 1. Is the Hikari in this fanfic, the same one from the anime? 2. If not, then which Hikari is it? Be sure to shed some light on this and let me know.

Wow. This is actually a pretty cool pairing, and a really good fic. -swears- I never did have the attention span to get the Gold Symbol. -glares at Emerald-

But I digress. Great story, honestly.

*SQUEE!* *Jumps up and down* *Stops* *Straightens hair*

Woohoo! Loved it :) though perhaps make Hikari a bit older? :P

Ah well. Wonderful story, well done.

-Anon.

Cute, but I'm not a big fan of weeaboo.

Okay, this is the second time I have tried to review this... I hope this goes through dammit! I wanna review this on my birthday! _

So anyways okay so. Y hilo thar Milkshakeshipping, it's been a long time but you have been worth it. -nod nod- I know you say that you're not that happy with it cause of this being the first time you have wrote about Lucy, but she's so deliciously in character it's... delicious. xD -weirdo- ... and that line. OH THAT LINE. "Hmm, you're a bit younger than most people who come in here and flirt with me..."

Vycksta hearts that line.

But Vycksta also hearts the one-shot in general. It pwns so much, it really does. Ya, we both know that I prefer Dawn with Mars and Lucy with Sabrina... but I wanted this, I got this and damn, i'm very happy with this.

-clings to your head and doesn't let go- Ha ha, you've got a Vycksta hat for life. ;P

Pee ess. I saw those cheeky little Challengeshipping hints. Oh yes I did. You crafty so and so. 8B