This was so amazing that I actually feel giddy after reading it. I adored all the Ace/Smoker interaction, especially the description of their logia powers and how they interacted and coalesced.

Yet my favourite, if I have one tbh, would be Luffy's brief appearences. I got chills at the last one, that sentence 'Old echoes, a thousand strong.' Just...wow. It FELT like Luffy, which was surprisingly unsurprising. So yeah, thanks so much for writing. Definitely faving this \0/

see... he- well, yeah... a shame that he won't actually see... ah.. a real shame...

Brilliant. Sheer, pure brilliance. I can't seem to find the appropriate words to describe what I felt when reading this but I'll try. It's just, you have a way with words. By Gods, you do.

I love your seamless transitions between scenes and thoughts. It's so smooth that it's almost unnoticeable. You have a good grasp of Ace's voice. And you make his relationship with Smoker so natural. I like the end bit, where they become their elements. I can see that scene in my head and it's gorgeous.

I also like your take on Luffy and his character.

You've made me a fan. Please keep writing, your stuff is high quality. C:

Cheers,

Fair.

Oh god... This is good.

In the middle you were rambling a bit, which made me very amused... But the ending was veeery nice. I'm a sucker for Smoker/Ace.

The problem with this sort of fic is I enjoy it, and then remember ACE IS DEAD TT_TT

And thus I feel like crying. Oh gooood D:

This fic is why I thought Smoker and Ace can be a couple. This, this, and nothing but this-okay, maybe your other SA fics, too. The seamless intertwining of Ace's life, divided up into three faucets, is gorgeous. Absolutely nothing short of breath-taking.

Wow. This was simply amazing. Characterizaton was great, and never a dull moment! It was funny, deep, then funny, the serious, then cute (gotta love Luffy!) and you even made Tashigi cool! This is definitely a favourite!

Special fave moment: in Smoker's defence, he has yet to pass out face-first in a plate of food.

LOL. It's true that Ace's sleeping habits are...extravagant to say the least!

Hmm... I actually read this a long time ago, but I happened across it again and discovered I still loved it to pieces! I really liked this story and still do. Your characterizations of everybody works very nicely.

I always think that Luffy is smart in a dumb way. XD Saying he has an old soul describes him perfectly.

And the AceXSmoker is just as awesome in this fic as it is in your others. . Good job

(:

Your fics always leave me smiling. I love ht way you write.

You've done a wonderful job on this story. It's not just the pairing I love, but also the way you've written it (characters and all).

If I had my way I would run over to you, hug you and hand you an award plus a plate filled with [insert food of choice] for your excellence. *thumbs up*

:D

Utterly fantastic!

Hi there, my most fav SmoAce writer!

It's my 2nd time reviewing any OP story, duh! (why am I telling this, btw o.?)

Your SmoAce fics are plain awesome, thank you very much for them. This one isn't my very fav tho, but I very much liked the theory 'bout Luffy having an old soul, and the whole spiraling into each other thing. And that most parts feel kinda ambiguous.

Although I wouldn't have reviewed if that were the only things I liked.

I like your writing style very much as well.

The way you take a sappy plot and turn it into a candy fascinates me.

Thank you one hella lot for wonderful SmoAce fics and looking forward to moar!:)

That... that was absolutely incredible. How the logia feel, Luffy's knowledge and innocence... everything through Ace's eyes... holy damn. I've always found the Ace/Smoker pairing, although cute in idea and incredibly hot (no pun intended), to be almost entirely unbelievable and well... you've made me believe it.

Incredible fanfic. I've never read anything this good with these characters before. Thank you for writing this.

This...was...awesome. _ Great job.

O.M.G. That was AMAZING! I LOVE the way you portrayed Smoker. LOVE

Keep writing!