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MissyAlexM
2008-08-03
ch 16,
abuseI so can't wait to see what's next. The last chapters were a bit confusing but it's getting clear right now.

Please, don't stop to write, most of we all know this is just a fiction, and we're nothing but 'material stuff' if we can't at least make art and dream as free people we are. Keep chapters coming, you're great!
MissyAlexM
2008-08-03
ch 1,
abuseDon't you dare to stop now! I know I'm so late I promise to read it till the end! You did a great job over here, congrats!
Verigood
2008-07-18
ch 16,
abuseHey sweetie! How are you?? I'm back... reading your fanfictions, I hope I can read them all, hehehe. So I know this sentence is from the chapter before, but I wanted to comment the last two at once... so:

(“Hi. I hope you don’t mind me showing up so early……I….I mean I know I said I wouldn’t come but….” she struggled to get out and then broke off into a smile when she now found herself being the source of his amusement.)

Let me say that I just loved the whole sentence, really, I could picture on my mind this scene... loved it!!

I enjoyed the “dream within a dream” concept, I thought you did a great job! As usually... you know how to let your readers crazy for wanting know about what comes next, hehehe, kisses!


p.s.: I've updated my Mevie fanfiction and there's a new story too *hug*.
McCoyscoutgirl22
2008-07-16
ch 16,
abuseokay, I totally love Foxy !!
lauren
2008-07-14
ch 16, anon.
abusegreat update i did kinda have a feeling that was gonna happen what with what you told me on msn lol i can't wait to see what happens update soon :) x
NYR88
2008-07-13
ch 16,
abuseI for one hope you're not asked to remove this story. It's simply a fictional story and I hope that people understand that. If you don't like it then don't click on it and don't read it.

But Russ, thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more. Hopefully, he'll tell her what he's feeling, of course I guess that depends on what he saw there at the end of the chapter.

Oh, and if it gets me some spoilers can I fib a little and tell you I'm still confused and might need you to clear it up for me? Hahaha
lostie21
2008-07-13
ch 16,
abuseIt's been a while since I last read this fic that I had to read the last chapter over again to refresh my memory. Thanks for updating this fic and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
didgeridoo
2008-07-13
ch 16,
abuselovely update...loved the way how matt touched evie's face...although i gotta say that i respect matt's marriage too much for having him divorced but thats jus my opinion ;) and ya comment at the end did confuse me a wee bit hehe!

love T xx
Verigood
2008-06-10
ch 15,
abuseI realized I did not leave a review!hehehe So, here I am... I wanna know the rest!! Matt is awake and that makes my heart happy, but I need to know what's going to happen next!! Please, update it, please!! *hug* Luv ya!
McCoyscoutgirl22
2008-05-05
ch 15,
abuseyei ! foxy is awake! can't wait for more!
Anna
2008-05-01
ch 15, anon.
abusei never know there is a Mavie fanfic!
i like this. write more. please!
Karen
2008-05-01
ch 15, anon.
abuseRuss, I was so happy when I found out that you updated this fanfic! Thank you! Thank god, that Matt is alive too!! Update this soon!Please!

Karen x
lauren
2008-04-30
ch 15, anon.
abuseyay. was that one of my early bday presents lol cos it sure felt good hehe glad you took my advice and kep him alive hehe and wow he woke up didn't think it'd be that soon but yay lol. update son lol x
Aneesa
2008-04-30
ch 15, anon.
abuseGreat chapter...Loved it
Update soon :D

Aneesa
x
didgeridoo
2008-04-29
ch 15,
abuseOMG!! loved the chap esp the cute flashback when they first met! so cute!! and i also liked havin evie all worried and of course the kiss when he woke up! aw!
cant wait for more! so please update soon!!

love T xx
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