 deans-sexy-alter-ego 2008-11-25 . chapter 5great story and sorry about your fiance guys can be jerks at times |
 Jayden Winters 2008-06-15 . chapter 4OMG! I totally remembered this story when I looked through my review history and was so excited to see that you updated! I'm sorry that it took so long to review you! ^.^''
And...I think that you should totally have a Demyx/Sora/Riku threesome! :) I'd totally drool. |
 Pillow-Talk from Deviantart 2008-05-15 . chapter 4 Great story! I want more! You have to write a new chapter fast!
I love the way ya biuld up the story and give the characters more "character" *giggle*
Anyway, Keep up that great work! |
 deans-sexy-alter-ego 2008-03-26 . chapter 4dude awesome chappie and great choice of music they all rock! and please post the next one soon! |
 deans-sexy-alter-ego 2007-12-01 . chapter 3** yea i'm with you on the bad boy thing, i would love to date one of them even if my parents will disown me for it...*goes into zombie mode* must find junkie, lol jk. post the next chappie soon please |
 Riku-stalker 2007-11-29 . chapter 3Hey, sorry I didn't review last chapter, didn't even know you updated. Damn FFnet didn't send me the alert, but for some reason, I got this one o_O
God, I feel so bad for Riku, he sounds like he could use a good meal, huh? They all do! (the druggies, more so, huh?)
Ooh, I hope Roxas meets Axel, squee, that would be soo cool :D And of course, gotta hope for that Earth and Sky reunion, yes? I sure hope so!
Welp, I really liked these past 2 chapters, can't wait for the next one! Let's hope that FFnet alerts me this time around!
-Riku-stalker |
 Jayden Winters 2007-11-28 . chapter 3I really liked this chapter too! Keep up the great work. It was well worth the wait. |
 Jayden Winters 2007-10-20 . chapter 2The only thing that I can suggest is to separate out points of view or else it gets a bit confusing. I use a single dash (-) to separate the shifts in povs.
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Anyway, have a good night. Looking forward to an update! |
 Jayden Winters 2007-10-20 . chapter 1This is really great. I love your writing style. And...I hope you don't take this the wrong way...but you seem to know what you're talking about. That's good! Writers that don't know what they're talking about sound foolish. Your story is wonderful so far. I read both chapters already, but am going to review on both. Drives me nuts when I don't get reviews on both chapters when I only have two up. |
 CoffeeAndRiku 2007-10-01 . chapter 2Love this chapter!! Now they finally meet! YAY! Please update soon!! ^__^ |
 deans-sexy-alter-ego 2007-09-18 . chapter 2cute story update soon and i could be a beta reader for you if you want me to |
 CoffeeAndRiku 2007-09-09 . chapter 1Haha, the boy in his visions were clearly Sora~! I love this story, so please update soon, okay? Riku is very f-cked up! ^__^ |
 Riku-stalker 2007-09-09 . chapter 1Yay its posted n_n Aww...this was so sad. Poor Riku, my little druggie T_T
Hmm...I'm guessing this person is, gee, I dunno, Sora O_o I could be wrong though...te-he.
Welp, this was great, sad, but great ^^ And Sephy, he's sounding a little evil there...stabbing poor little Riku *sniffle* I hope Sora comes to his rescue soon.
Welp, update soon pretty please with sugar on top :3
-Riku-stalker |