 Bananarawrz 2008-09-13 . chapter 1Well, I'm going to attempt to write a decently-lengthed review on this, along with technical points, but, and forgive to say, I believe that I shall fail miserably.
This was hilarious. And cracky. Yes, very cracky. And, y'know, it was a great amusement for me, and so ridiculously fun to read.
And I've decided not to even attempt to critique on technical points. This is crack, and crack is meant to be messy. But you've kept it really tidy, from what I can see, actually.
Ling and Ranfan (Or is it Ran Fan?) are one of the cutest possible couples if you ask me, and my humongous sketchbook can attest to that.
Anyways, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed it. It gave me a great laugh.
And a good day to you!
~Bananarawrz |