 Montana-Rosalie 2009-06-18 . chapter 1Very nice. :) |
 Ditte3 2007-10-31 . chapter 1Please write more. |
 fanonymous 2007-09-12 . chapter 1 Lovely ficlet! I hope this is just a beginning??
Love these two together--just a brilliant pairing. Well done! |
 Dawnie-7 2007-09-12 . chapter 1That was a great opening line. Concept is simplistically brilliant. And I actually think I like this little one shot more than I liked the whole story. Very close call though :) |
 1BabyBoy 2007-09-09 . chapter 1I'm glad to read about Sheldon and Liz together again after some months. Glad that they are once again sharing a bed. Now, I'm wondering if he and Chris have made peace? If Mandy still worships "daddy," or has she now been disillusioned? And I think Sheldon should tell Liz that he really is starting to lose what it is she looked like for him. She might be saddened but she would be glad of the honesty. Also, think about it. Wouldn't it be more flattering to know that he is with her in the here and now because he wants to be and not because he is simply lusting after a memory or trying to recapture something that no longer has any relevance for either of them? Thanks for this story. I do enjoy reading and re-reading all of your OUATIM fiction! |
 Lynx Ryder 2007-09-09 . chapter 1You came back to Liz and Sands! I didn't think you would and I am very, very glad.
As usual, a wonderful piece of writing, sensitive yet not overly sentimental. Real.
Please write more. :)
Jay x |