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Tovc
2009-07-20 . chapter 8
Finished the sequel! Great so far, i ADORE you writing style.

BUT HMM, WHATS THIS NO UPDATES IN A YEAR?!?! WHAT!?

Well:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
If you don't update soon,
NO MUFFINS FOR YOU.
Chaos of the asylum
2008-11-15 . chapter 8
WOOT MORE MORE MORE! XD
AHAHA!
Chaos of the asylum
2008-11-15 . chapter 7
SO COOL! XD I love it.
xxXInvader KasyXxx
2008-08-18 . chapter 8
I love this one too
Wheres the rest lol ^36
Thomas Rose
2008-04-22 . chapter 8
Ahh... This chapter...
I liked this chapter.
I loved the intracacy of it. The prospect of alien planets always fascinates me, and this chapter was well played out. I also enjoyed the shex scene, and the ending was sad...
All in all, fantastic chapter.
Oh, btw, I have a deviantart page up, it's
grit-careless. . Visit it, will ya? :3
Much love and support,
Tommy~
Sweetums128neo
2008-04-09 . chapter 8
8D I know you too~! Can't give you a username but I do know you! < 3 And how'd you know it was me? XD

Anyways YES!

Firstly I'd like to say that this part I saw in my head perfectly:

"With one last burst of energy, Dib threw as much of his body weight as he could without hurting Zim into a few final thrusts until the Irken threw back his head and arched his back perfectly against Dib's body. With a loud moan, he shot his seed all over Dib's hand, some of it dripping from his fingertips onto the bed underneath. The way Zim spasmed before contracting around Dib's member had him crying out in pleasure also. "Zim, I'm...I'm gonna...AH!" Dib's body tensed as he came long and hard, holding Zim's hips in place until he finished releasing his own seed into Zim's body."

Particularly where Dib was finishing and holding Zim's hips. 83 I just stared then giggled insanely.

Such an awesome chapter. It was so good.

And now...I kinda felt bad for Membrane in this chappie. D8 I feel horribly, but so good at the same time!

-flails frantically- ;3;
Sweetums128neo
2008-02-23 . chapter 7
-waves a little flag- Hiya~! ;D I'mma new reviewer! Yay! ^-^

Anyways, I read through Idle Hands and just finished reading what there was to read in Near Misses here. Obviously. XD

^-^ I love it so far. I'm feeling for Zim and Dib, and Gaz too. I kinda see where Membrane is coming from, but it's a little difficult to sympthize with him. o_o; Understand what I'm talking about? X'D Hope so.

And I really just...wanna kill Purple and Red.

-iskippedthroughtheRAPRwhenisawit'causei'mnotahugefan-

< 3

Hee hee. Much luffles to you and your awesome writing skills, and I can't wait to see an e-mail in my inbox letting me know you updated. ^_^!
Apple Pornography
2008-01-30 . chapter 7
Ah well, sadly I don't really have much to say in this review except keep up the good work, and I wish I had that ship... Soz, hopefully I'll be more alive next time. And I even logged in! Umm, I wonder when I'll ever get my fanfics off the ground...
Sora4president
2008-01-16 . chapter 7
Yay! They got out! ... but I'm still on Earth... damnit.
Well, ZADR is my crack, feed the addiction! *hands you a slice of cheese*
Apple Pornography
2007-12-12 . chapter 6
Urgh, I've had those moments where I'm just about to fall asleep, but then I'm like, "No, get this 'r that done!" So then I end up staying up an extra hour or so, because I get horribly sidetracked. Well, this chapter was sad and awesome, mostly because I have an unconsciousness fetish. I think we all do, really. I anticipate the next chapter, and feel relieved now that things are starting to clear up. I do wonder what will happen when/if the Tallest arrive though...
As for the Rilzit thing, those chapters are ** LONG! I mean, 56 chapters, and all of them are at least over 2,0 words long! It's gonna be a while before I finish that one (or at least catch up to the current chapter). Well, for now, I think I'll leave you with my review. Good job, and I await your next chapter!
Scarlet Pikachu
2007-12-08 . chapter 6
Wowza! No, please hang on Zimmy dear, hang on so you can see the sunset. I always loved those and... Gah! Getting ff topic now!
Scarlet Pikachu
2007-12-08 . chapter 5
Woah! That seemed kinda mean to have happen to Gaz, I mean, it's just my opinion and all but it's kinda harsh...

But I loved it for some unknown reason too!
Yaoiholic28
2007-12-04 . chapter 6
DON'T LET ZIM DIE!
I BEG OF YOU!
oh yes.
-slaps you sissily-
How dare Dib take Membrane's side!?!?!?!?

=]
Please update soon.
Sora4president
2007-12-04 . chapter 6
NO!! ZIM! IS THE BABY OKAY?! WHAT'S DIB GONNA DO?! WHAT HAPPENED TO BIXXLE(haha, funny name!)?! WHY DID MY PARENTS USE UP ALL THE CREAME CHEESE?! D=
That was truly evil of you, ya' know?
Scarlet Pikachu
2007-12-01 . chapter 2
Actually you do Mpreg really, really well. Glad to read this stuff, I've been away from the computer for way too long!
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