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| Villemo 2008-09-22 ch 1, | abuseVery touching. Great characterizations and overall beautifully written, thanks for sharing =) |
| Gen Varel 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThis story was kind of sad, but sweet. It reminded me of the one I wrote, "Second Chances", where Sam did exactly that. Go back in time and fix something she couldn't live with. Well written and touching. Good job. |
| BettyHall223 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseI always love your stories and this one was especially good. Please write more. |
| mary 2007-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent read |
| PatriciaS 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseNice one, like the way it shows their trust in each other. |
| froggy0319 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI just loved how Sam got up to sit next to Jack even though he told her he was OK :) Thanks for posting, as I really did enjoy this. |
| dp 2007-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery Nice. |
| Cole J 2007-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYet another beautifully written story! Lovely combination of scene descriptions, emotional angst, reasonable resolution, true characterizations, and perfect voices. This is why I look forward to your stories so much! Thanks for sharing! |
| pain in the mikta 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story! Very insightful and touching! Bravo! |