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Reviews For: Nonspatial Continuum

Villemo
2008-09-22
ch 1,
abuseVery touching. Great characterizations and overall beautifully written, thanks for sharing =)
Gen Varel
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abuseThis story was kind of sad, but sweet. It reminded me of the one I wrote, "Second Chances", where Sam did exactly that. Go back in time and fix something she couldn't live with.

Well written and touching. Good job.
BettyHall223
2007-09-10
ch 1,
abuseI always love your stories and this one was especially good. Please write more.
mary
2007-09-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseExcellent read
PatriciaS
2007-09-10
ch 1,
abuseNice one, like the way it shows their trust in each other.
froggy0319
2007-09-09
ch 1,
abuseI just loved how Sam got up to sit next to Jack even though he told her he was OK :) Thanks for posting, as I really did enjoy this.
dp
2007-09-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery Nice.
Cole J
2007-09-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseYet another beautifully written story! Lovely combination of scene descriptions, emotional angst, reasonable resolution, true characterizations, and perfect voices. This is why I look forward to your stories so much! Thanks for sharing!
pain in the mikta
2007-09-09
ch 1,
abuseWonderful story! Very insightful and touching! Bravo!
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