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| crokettsgirl 2008-08-10 ch 45,  | abuseThis was an excellent story! I love all your twists in the plot. Ducky being Tony's dad, yeah! And Abby and Tim getting married. How you had Jen, Monica and Antonio and Mark all in this togeter and held it out. You gave piece by piece and in between showing how Tony was health wise and mentally. Showed Gibbs and his relationship too. The whole story was well thought out. I am not going to the sequel..yeah a sequel..lol...Sue |
| Phoenix414 2008-07-25 ch 45, | abuseGrat story, really loved it! |
| Phoenix414 2008-07-25 ch 43, | abuseLove that Ducky ias Tony's father, so much better than that other **. |
| Phoenix414 2008-07-25 ch 36, | abuseLove Winnie, hope she stays a good girl- female Gibbs_ WOW! |
| Phoenix414 2008-07-24 ch 31, | abuseReally love all the honesty going on within the threats! |
| Phoenix414 2008-07-24 ch 21, | abuseNew to this site and came across your story, am thoroughly enjoying it. Always knew McGee had balls, and you displayed them perfectly in this chapter, had me rolling with laughter. Can't wait to read the rest! |
| AquaRias 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuse...Jenny wasn't director when Kate was alive. She came in in the third season, KAte died in the last episode of the second season. So I'm guessing this is either (a) Kate never died in your universe or (b) Jenny was director earlier in your universe or (c) You clearly havn't seen enough of the show to be writing about it. On top of that, Your characters are all OOC. Sorry, but it's true. not one of them is acting in character at all. Sorry. |
| ladysavay 2008-05-03 ch 40, | abuseI can not acces chapter 39 "InTERRORgation". When i try i get a blank page that says it's chapter one and the drop down menu only goes to chapter 35. What's up with that? Any place else I can read this in it's entireity? |
| Takiko Kyuuketsuki 2008-02-28 ch 13, | abuseHey there. Hey, "ding dong, the ** is gone", isn't it an allusion to Klaus Nomi?? (Love that man éè =D) |
| super em 2007-10-09 ch 45, | abuseYay! That was so great, loved the McAbby wedding! (he laughed when she proposed? Haha McGee :P ) You really do rule :) I'll be watching out for the sequel now :) |
| foxyladyhubbards 2007-10-08 ch 45, | abuseDamn this was good. But now that it's over, we need MORE. |
| bigiba 2007-10-08 ch 45, | abuseoh what a great story, thank you for your great work, I enjoyed all chapters, I hope there will be soon a sequel or another story (naturally Tony whump) |
| special agent Ali 2007-10-08 ch 45, | abuseyour strange but thanks for the wonderful McAbby wedding |
| babs6608 2007-10-08 ch 45, | abuseThere had better be a sequel, you can't leave it like that! Many thanks again for sharing a great story with us. |
| poohbear123 2007-10-08 ch 45, | abuseGREAT STORY |