Reviews for Not Even Close

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TutorGirlml 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this one too. You are incredibly good at writing Flack! (Which is awesome, cause I love Flack and always excited to read good Flack stories) I really liked the scene when Flack and Danny come in to the break room and she spills her drink all over herself and Flack's trying to help her clean up and she gets even madder at him cause he's kinda turning her on. They don't even actually have to be doing anything much, something about the two of them together just radiates really hot chemistry. I think that on the show sometimes too, and as far as we know, nothing's going on there! I loved that Flack was trying to be honorable, but I could totally understand poor Stella's misunderstanding too The kissing scene was great, but Stella's words at then end completely knocked the air out of me! I'm glad there's a sequel to this one.
TwistedSister03 2008-01-13 ch 1,	abusethat was very cute! great work =]
slayer-p 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abusePlease continue. ;)
dustie-snark 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abuseAugh! Update, please! It's lovely; your description is great.
LocoGreggo 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseHoly crud...it can't end there. Please a sequel? Continuation? Something?!
SavvyAngel 2007-09-20 ch 1,	abusesnort Yeah, that pool table is pretty special, I must admit. O:-) AWW to Danny and Lindsay's first kiss. (snicker in daddy’s truck.) Wow. That is one amazing kiss with Stella and Flack. And oh does Hawkes feel awkward now. Poor thing. sad face Note to Stel and Flack: pull yourselves together! :) Great job!
kokiri fairy 2007-09-18 ch 1,	abuseGreat work! i loved reading this
Kat31 2007-09-18 ch 1,	abuseWonderful story, amazingly hot and oh oh oh, and then argh! They hurt each other without meaning to. Flack was staring at her, his eyes burning with a desire, a need for her, that left her unable to breathe; that scared her; that terrified her. Her instinct for self preservation kicked in. - as much as I want to smack her, all too believable a reaction. You write a lovely Stella/Flack, if you ever feel like doing it again...
Elainhe 2007-09-12 ch 1,	abuseThe pc just "ate" my review! So, let me try again. I loved the hints of humor with the underlying feeling of angst. Great opening banter. I enjoyed Flack's explanation and Stella's reaction. It was an unexpected end, but perfect. You wrote them all beautifully.
CarolinaH.Manning 2007-09-11 ch 1,	abuseFiesta with M&Ms. my favorite kind. and this was an excelent story. just one little thing - please, please, please write a sequel, pretty please makes puppy dog eyes
mandy9578 2007-09-10 ch 1,	abuseThis was really hilarious...Loved the humor in it...had me laughing out loud...I'm glad you've written a Flack/Stella story...The ending though left me hanging and wanting more...This has potential to be more than a one-shot! :)
foxdvd 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseDear Ms. Marialisa: I just had the pleasure of reading the loving piece of fiction you recently posted at FF. My utmost appreciation as being mentioned in your author notes. I greatly enjoyed the back and forth style you used to tell the story, and the sexual tension build up was flawless. The specks and sparks of humours interspersed here and there add for a refreshing touch that makes the whole story almost perfect. Regrettably, and as much as I adored reading this, the story has one major flaw, impossible to overlook, which, regrettably, doesn't allow this otherwise outstanding fic to go into my all-time-favourite archive. The above-mentioned flaw in, basically, one tiny word found at the top fo the story's information: Complete. ARE YOU OUTTA YOUR BLOODY MIND? Get back in there and continue this! And don't you dare show your face aroudn here until you come up with a second chapter!
prplerayne 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseOh! Another Stella/Flack fic! I do so love reading those!! I really like how you use the D/L established relationship to launch the Stella/Flack relationship!
SallyJetson 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseI love that the introduction of humor -- Flack writing 2 books, one about the Harely and the other about the pool table getting the boot. smile Maybe you could write a story about that! YOu captured the complexity of Don and Stella's emotions perfectly. Out of sync but not out of touch. Stella knee-jerking into her defense mechansim before she even realized what was happening and Don shutting down at Stella's reaction. Beautiful angst. You know how I feel about the followup! :)
Forest Angel 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseI loved this, you can feel the tension. I think this could go further, I'd love to see what happens next.

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