|Reviews for Morning Star|
| BroadwayBabe32 9/15/07 . chapter 8
| gemma smells like apple cake 9/15/07 . chapter 5
i knew it i knew i'm so smart ok not really i was hinted at many of time but i knew it. great story by the way though i'm not completly up to date with it yet i'm just to tired to keep reading yes you had a lemon but it was very.. it was simple not over the top i liked it like that it felt more true to charcter so props to you will give my full opinion of the story once i'm updated so don't feel rushed to update cause i'm not finished though it would be cool not to have to stop
| MeyaRose 9/13/07 . chapter 8
| Bribbie 9/13/07 . chapter 8
What i meant about jacob before, I wasn't talking about Killing him! i told you i like him, i wouldn't want him to die... i was asking if he'd be present in the story, as more than a passing memory... a question not quite answered by this chapter but... hinted, I get the feeling, he'll be in later... I wonder what EXACTLY he thought though, about the Babbies... hm... It's hard to tell... so many things could have crossed his mind... Those should be my children, I can't believe she's have HIS babbies, eww gross i didn't want to think they'd do that!, How the hell did that even happen? I thought they were sterile, I wish that i was with her, and so many other things... hm... much to consider, Leah's a bitch, I didn't have her pegged as a bitch, Bitter and self centered, but not purposely cruel, like for the FUN of it, maybe so some one else could share her hurt, but not for the sake of being cruel...
I'm glad they're normal, I knew they would be though, or at least reletivly, I'm sure they'll be a little different, but... oh well
Everyone(minus rosalie) is going to be thrilled, I forsee more tears of joy in the next chapter... lol...
But rosalie, I'd miss emmett, They will come back though right? I mean, uncle emmett, that's just too good to pass up... but rose... I can't believe she'd want to hurt Bella, and especially not a child, her desire to be a mother would overrule any harsh feelings toward children, i don't think she could ever hurt one, Her death toll is only 7, and those were the people who caused her to lose her life (and two body gaudrs) I doubt she'd really be that violent... but, irrational definatly, i still think she's gonna kick into Auntie mode...eventually...
Ok well Don't keep me waiting too long, and thanks for replying to my review, i love it when i get specific answers, instead of trying to decipher things from the story, especially if it wasn't a question that the plot, or dialoge can answer thuroughly.
| Carlisle060 9/13/07 . chapter 8
cant wait for the next chapter! OMG! UPDATE! :]
| titania86 9/13/07 . chapter 8
Wow! Such a detailed and rich story! I like how you really stayed true to the characters. I can't wait for the next installment!
| imagine purple 9/13/07 . chapter 8
but didn't alice have a vision of healthy VAMPIRE children, and couldn't leah smell VAMPIRE on bella? and if they were vampire babies then their hearts wouldn't beat, right?
| Piper Anne Marie 9/13/07 . chapter 8
I love this chapter! please continue!
| dark fairy79 9/13/07 . chapter 8
AW, VERY GOOD STORY
| luvthesebooks 9/13/07 . chapter 8
Very cute and sweet. Thanks!
| Bribbie 9/12/07 . chapter 6
Can we say AWE! That's just the cutest thing ever in the History of like ever! I love little things like that, the smallest details can make all the differenve between a good, story and an amazing story. little heart beats... *sigh* Edward is just so wonderful, it sucks he doesn't really exist doesn't it? But I Guess he's just too perfect for reality to hold... *sigh* Ah... yes well on we move!
| Bribbie 9/12/07 . chapter 5
hm... You know, I'm still not sure how vampire sex works... They don't have blood flow, so how are the males supposed to, um, well, get the sails up? And there's no bodily fluids so there's be nothing to fertilize the egg... never mind that though...
but I'm glad I'm re reading, i missed the Boy and a Girls part last time, though i figured it would ba that way... if you read my babbeling message you would know..? lol
So what Will they be?
Half/half, They can age and they eat food, and have a beating heart, BUT they have the vampire abilities, like strength, speed, agilaity, beauty, and what not?
Although now I have some concerns with the Volturi. if they are Hlaf and Half, they won't like that. Because what if one falls in love with a human, and they were let in on the secret? what if a friend found out about their parents being Vampires? I think the Volturi will see these and other possibilties as threats, and I'm sure they would see the possibilities... although Aro will probably see both the Good (well good for him anyway) possibilities as well as the bad... hm... i wonder... so much to think about. Your definatly going to have to update regularly to keep us readers from going insane lol.
| Bribbie 9/12/07 . chapter 4
That was really really good... no smutty lemonyness... just perfect, I don't quite know the word, but i guess, the term pure Love would work, even though it sounds kinda hokey... lol
So Does Tanya re enter the story? because i am sensing a few sub plots, and i was wondering if they will be addressed...
Anyway gots to keep reading...
| Bribbie 9/12/07 . chapter 3
I love weddings... Hopefully my mom will get remarried and i will get to be Most Momentous maid, cuz that whole planning and everything makes me giddy just to think about. I'll prolly be the weirdest bride ever if i get married... Cuz some how i know I'll be like super picky, yet try not to go overboard, but still want to go overboard, i hope my Most momentous maid will be able to handel me lol...
So I assume, this whole Jacob Dream thing will eventually be relevant? Cuz it bugs me when things are made to seem important and then are never explained... Hey! Will you explain the relevance of it? I promise it won't ruin anything for me, I love spoilers, obviously, I only re-read stories that are good, and even though i know what happens even the 10th time i've read it i still get excited, even when i can quote it word for word... so don't worry about that, unless your one of those, "Nope you'll just have to wait." sort of people, then w/e, but i just really want to know... but anyway that's up to you...
| Bribbie 9/12/07 . chapter 2
i decided to go back and do some re-reading, cuz i like to make sure i didn't miss anything...
this chapter made me giggle, and snicker, and snigger, and what not... it was just perfect...
i love Alice, she's a lot like me, except I'm Tall and i have Dirty blonde hair, but we have similare personalities...
You know what though, i gonna look for a mistake you made, there's got to be one, SOMEWHERE, seriously, one point of ooc-ness, cuz you can't get all the Characters dead on unless you are secretly Stephanie Meyer... wait are you? lol I'm looking for the mess up and i will find it if it's there, if not then your my hero, but seriously, what am i supposed to critique? humph. lol anyway i got stuff to do later so i better keep reading.