Great story. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for the HEA.

Wow, I completely understand why people acknowledge this as the true 4th book...and I loved Breaking Dawn! But this was also amazing. Extra amazing were the similarities since this is older. I loved that Edward finally did something about the Jacob problem, and how they had to deal with the other stuff they never actually did before. Bella's power was pretty awesome and original. It made sense. And I adored she was human for most of it. This made a lot of sense and I love that. Great Job!

oh man. i almost cried at this. like, my eyes got all watery but tears didnt actually fall. how'd you do that with hardly any words? you're good! :)

love your writing style. it's so clear and precise.. not too much, not too little... just right. makes it seem really well edited and polished.

Fabulous story. I'm so engrossed I keep forgetting to review for you. Very well done.

I'm really enjoying this story. It's so well done.

I came via the ficster blog and read the story in one go. It was very enjoyable and I especially liked how you handled Bella's goodbyes to her parents. Another great scene was Renee's almost instantaneous realization that Bella was pregnant. Thanks for writing.

Lovely, i loved how jake bonded with the twins at the end. The civil war.

Great ending :)

They could have been yours. - THAT was a low blow Bella.

Just when i thought I could safely read on without tears.. nup.

Another great chapter.. now onto the next!

Another amazing chapter!

I was in tears when I Amir talked of how all the Cullen's were taken care of. It seemed too real. Then the babies in the chapter before (beautiful) and.. the ending. Edward was always SO irritating about changing Bella lol

And Amir is right, like Edward was the only one to get a human pregnant. That always bugged me in BD

That was so emotional. The presents, how happy the grandparents were. Oh so sad knowing what we know is going to happen.

And the plans at the end.

I need to go cry for awhile, far too good!

Much better than Breaking Dawn, IMO. It has a more logical story line and nothing so overtly fantastical that you have trouble just "going there." I loved the flow and I loved Bella and Edward working towards better communication. Admitting mistakes. So yah, I was so wrapped in a good story I have nothing to critique you, other than I am looking forward to more of your work.

Thanks!

Loved the wedding, and Jake's howl at the right moment *chuckles*

i know this was written awhile ago, but this was truly amazing and really wish that Breaking Dawn would have been just like morning star. It was great! Thank you so much for the excellent reading material

Absolutely amazing1 I love how close the characters stayed in the story. I am amazed at how much this story is like BD, but different at the same time. and BD wasnt even out yet! Great job with that...and I'm from WV...maybe my Edward is out there somewhere...

I look forward to reading more of your work!