God, this is fantastic. I am such a Sirrus and Achenar fan and was so disappointed when they actually died - not just vanished, hah. This is definitely my favorite Myst fanfiction and I think it perfectly incases Achenar's personality as well as his - accurate - view of his brother. Fabulous job and I look forward to reading more of your stories. :)

Holy... holy crap. Brilliant. Just brilliant. I mean-- wow.

Faved.

You haven't played Rev yet and already it owns you...mwahaha! But of course Revelation pwns, so it's all good :)

"I hadn’t expected to have to pick him up, to hold him." from that part to the end, yeah I definitely got teary. Very emotive and it really shows the family relationship between the two that tends to be ignored. Lovely piece of work my dear :)