aw! so cute!

Very cute! But I'm a tad confused...I just read a story - published perhaps a month after yours - that is very much like this one, except it's about Lily and James. I'm not talking similar plot lines here, I mean it was practically word-for-word the same except for the names. I was just wondering...what's up with that?

AW!!

Very cute! I like the shy Scot in this piece. Also I liked how you kind of trailed off at the end allowing the reader to connect the dots. I think my favorite part though was the lines:

"Well, for starters, make sure you call her by her first name. Girls are rarely flattered being treated like one of the guys or a teammate.”

Oliver’s eyes widened as if this would never have occurred to him.

Very funny. Great job.

Aw this is a cute story! A sweet read, well done!

That was so cute! I don't usually go for one-shots, but since it was Oliver/Katie, I made an exception. I really love it!

Short- but oh, how incredible sweet!
You've really done a great job with this!

very cute~ you should make it longer :D

you had me giggling in my chair. that was just adorable. lovely story. :]

that was really cute!!

AW... *girlish squeal*

This was really cute. I really enjoyed it!