Wow. This was really good! It had that X-files feeling to it.

:)

very nicely written. great original story line also!

Wowwwwwwwww... This was really good. You have real maturity and depth in your writing; I was really impressed. Hehehe, the irony of M&S suffering the frustration of a 'shipper... I love it. All of it was really well-written, and your sense of detail really impressed me. The one fault was that it was really long - I got distracted after awhile. But I came back to it, which is a good sign, and it really needed to be this long to have all this good stuff in. Your descriptions especially were really good, stronger than your dialogue, though that was good too. Muy impressive.

lol that's a good story

wow. that was really, really good. like, seriously. wow. you should have them turn it into an episode. of course dd is gone now. grrrrrrr... oh well. I can't wait to read more.

Great story - well written with an interesting plot.

Very good! What makes X-files fun is the unique relation ship between Mulder and Scully, and I think your story shows this very well:)