Bravo! I really felt pulled into the story. Sometimes you read these, and you just can't quite get there, but I felt like I really understood exactly what the characters were feeling. :) It was interesting to hear a story told from his perspective for once. This is only the second in the past few days that I've seen. :) I think I will have to go check out what else you have posted to read; I love your style.

I did want to bring a small detail to your attention. Kunzite asks why she kissed him yesterday, but in the paragraph above that scene, it says it's been a few days that he hadn't seen her. I didn't know if it was intentional (a slip of words from him) or just a mistake.

I loved loved loved your story! I absolutely positively loved your story! I am a huge huge huge Malachite Mina fan, so I loved your story!

Aww! you ended it -there-?

So cruel.. I want more! I absolutely loved it ;)

So wonderfully understated and cool for a love scene. Lovely. The insecurity is very sweet, on both of their parts.

Love it love it. Your very talented...

How do I put those? Let's see...how about too much for words. I'm really thankful you wrote both parts to this piece - It was nice reading it from both character's P.O.V's

Please continue your wonderful writing.

I love this story and the other part of it... it's so inspiring and very well made!

I hope to read a lot of your new works soon!

I love Mina and Kunzite!

I love your writing so much, that I just had to read more. So here I am, about to read everything you've ever written (if time allows) have to save the longer ones for later.

I don't know why this didn't get a lot of reviews, it's a great one shot. Reading from Kunzite's POV is interesting. I like how you have his thoughts be so uncontrolled, when his demener is the complete oposite. It really shows how much he's in love with Minako. And of course the romantic scene was perfect! So bravo, from one MinaXKunz fan to another :)

Beautiful story! Very well written, with minimal grammatical mistakes (for instance in: 'what caused her to unhappy earlier' you're missing 'be' between 'to' and 'unhappy'). It had a great flow , even though I would have liked it to go on a bit longer.

Again, beautiful story!

Hoping to read more stories from you,

T.I

well its a very nice story with alot of emotion. though i do wonder who it is. could it sere and endy, or someone else?

Really good, but whom is it about?

Minako&Kunzite (or maybe Ace?)

Serenity and Endymion?

however, nice story.

Wow. I really liked that fic. It was so sweet!

I'm guessing that it was Endymion and the Princess, right?

nice, cept who is it about?